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Thread: Needing Proffesional Help

  1. #1
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    Question Needing Proffesional Help

    As insparation from a guy called LaraRules81 I am wrting a tomb raider fan story and MAY eventually post it on the forums so i want it to be perfect . So i need someone to:

    1. Translate "Kill her quickly" from englsh to Spanish
    2. Think of two lads names (first and last) and finally
    3. SHOULD KURTIS BE IN IT???

    Thanks
    DWFL
    My brain is on critically low battery :D :p

  2. #2
    i got the second one!

    smithy scotty and the brawny man!

  3. #3
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    1. Matala rapido--that's the translation

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    Quote Originally Posted by DWFL View Post
    3. SHOULD KURTIS BE IN IT???
    Do what you want to. I don't think a lot of people exactly admire Kurtis, though.

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    If it were up to me I'd add another famous Spanish saying;
    "mi cabeza es en fuego"

    I'd vote no on Kurtis, Lara works alone!
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  6. #6
    lara does indeed work alone...

    so no kurtis, no zip and no alister.
    "no no no... my mother is dead... my mother is dead. My mother died a long time ago. You're NOT my mother." -Lara Croft

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    If you want to include any backup characters in your story, though, go for it. This isn't a videogame, but a fan-fic, I take it.

  8. #8
    Oooo! AWESOME! I'm something of a writer myself. I'd LOVE to read what you wrote when you are finished. About your questions:

    1) Can't help w/ that (don't speak Spanish!). And it's already been answered.

    2) What kind of names are you looking for? Tough sounding? Unusual sounding? Ordinary? I can probably help here if you know what kind of names you want.

    3) I wouldn't have more than a cameo for Kurtis. Just have him step into the story, wave at the KT fans, and step promptly back out the door. He's a very divisive character. You either love him or hate him, so if you make him too integral to the plot, the same will apply to your story. Just my opinion though.

    Hope your story works out! Post it when you're done!

    -CL

  9. #9
    About 3...

    Including Kurtis you risk many people not liking it... Not including him you lose nothing!!
    "Hey, dude, I just bought the new. Tomb R... oh, credits...."

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    Thanks everyone that has helped

    @ CL489: I want ordinary names and such so nothing big

    @Natla-Rules: thanks for that but i got it wrong stupid me :P i want kill HIM quickly not her DOH!!

    @ italibabee: erm no....

    I will post a taster of what is to come later on thanks everyone
    My brain is on critically low battery :D :p

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    i have added a number 4

    4. A name for an evil company e.g. Natla Technologies or Bartolli to be printed on the side of the mercanary trucks

    Plus yes lara works alone but in this one there are two lads that are dragged into laras world so they have to fend for themselves with Lara helping in bits. Then comes the question should Kurtis help too because i thought Kurts was a wicked character.

    Thanks
    My brain is on critically low battery :D :p

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    then it's just "Matalo" instead lol

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