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    Exclamation Poem Peaples!!!!! LOOK HERE!!!

    This is for all of you who love to write poems out there!!! I will be here writing daily tomb raider themed poems.....i hope

    I am not creating this for any special reason.....just for people who like to create poems

    Any kind of poem is good for this thread, it does not have to be any special theme of type of poem.

    I will mostly be writing free written poems and hiakus. Do watever poem theme you like. This is just for the fun of it.

    Like i said, i will try to be here everyday creating new and original poems from me. I do not take any body elses poems, i completly make up my own.






    SO, this is my first one today. I have tried to enter the competition with this one, but entered too late. So i just wana post my poems. This 1 is a tomb raider themed hiaku:::

    "Ruins of life rest...
    Hidden secrets lie unknown....
    Some best left alone"
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    it's because i find myself alone..
    it's because i can't escape this misery,
    it's because without u i'm nothing, without will..
    why am i living? why u are here?
    it's too late for me i almost beaten by fear!

    denis

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    Heres another one by me. Its how im feeling now.....im not going to tell the reasons why though....


    "Why wont they understand....
    Parts of me....shattered
    and i have nowhere else to go

    But to darkness....
    Until they finally understand whats really going on

    For i am in love
    and yet they think im insane

    I yearn to be alone....
    With him i want to end

    In darkness i will stay....
    Until they quit critisizing...."


    Its not one of my best at all. but its how im truly feeling inside.
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    most people here are unfriendly! to tell you the truth i answering them on the way they diserve and being strong on words mostly..most of them here are little kids 13 and 14 years old..that explains their behaviour if in their homes there isn't love and care and of corse a parent to teach his child what is good and what isn't. most of them actually really diserve a punch on their ugly faces because of their behaviour.
    in fact in internet you can be anyone you like..anyone! you say you are 20 then you are 20 because u got the mask but in real life most of them can't even talk to older people so they going behind their pc's and releasing all their anger and unfriendly comments online..because we can't harm them! as for this thread i glad you create it..and about the others..don't give a sh..t!

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    i am so sorry for acting like a child...thx for posting that...it made me laugh! and i truly am 19. just saying, because i love my age and wish i could freez at this age and those children do need a punch in the gut! ha
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    what do you have vampire? ps3 or xbox?

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    both

    but dont have online or live, because we dont have the special cable yet to hook ps3 up to internet.......and no xbox live because i dont wana have to pay for it.
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    add on ps3..denistf

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    add denistf to ps3. like i said......dont have online....i need the "ethernet cable"
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    aww ok then..no prob

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    I will get it though.....just been busy with school you know.... A.I. ........ Ill add you when i do get online though.
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    ok thanks..don't forget that to download gol you need internet..ps3 has wi fi connection too.

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    Yea...i know....i super smart in technology.....thats what im mainly studying here....wat im focused


    Did you get my friend request???
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    Heres another one. A random poem i wrote July 22, 2010:::::

    "Here I stand.
    Fighting until my last breath.
    I am no warrior, but a child.
    Yearning for the precious comfort of their mother.
    But it is too late to turn back now.
    Fresh blood has already been spilled on a battlefield of cold war.
    You see...
    For I am a child in the beginning....
    But a warrior in the end."


    Hoped you like it
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    it's epic vampy..i loved it..it reminds me a lot.. please put internet on ps3 so we can trade pictures and poems as messages

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    If i can. Ive been really busy and still am. I have been writing a report on computer programming and stuff thats complicated to explain. Anyway.....heres another poem.:::::


    "Crushed by the pressure of life itself.
    Wishing i can be understood.
    By someone......
    Something.....
    Anything......

    But here i lay....
    continuing my confusion.
    Stuck in the darkness waiting to be pulled away

    But nothing comes...
    Just me and the sad still silence.
    That consumes me whole.......

    Tell me....
    Am i crazy?
    Mad?
    Insane....?

    Help me dear god.....
    Figure out this mess.
    This.....corruption.....
    That has entered my now drowning life."



    Its still not my best. But im completly honest of how i feel in my poetry. So, yea, thats me. How i feel now and most days. I will have better poetry tomorrow i hope. I really wish i could write more. Because once i started i didnt wana stop....
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    Wow..feeling so bad?

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    Im getting better thanks.
    Just so much pressure has been going on.Better now.

    Heres a poem i written a few days ago in my notebook. Its just random.
    Here it is:::::

    "Seeing the moon rise...
    Watching the sun set...

    Why cant all life be this innocent?

    Look into the stars of night.
    To find your true reflection...
    In its deep blue skies."

    Hope you like!
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    it's so beautiful and so dreamy..you are very good on poems..you making me feeling so good with these poems

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    Thanks. Your realy the only one who has really listened to my poems. Ive showed other people my poetry....they just dont have that much interest.

    Can post poem today. Busy studying. And have no idea for a poem right now. And things have been going really good lately for me. They have been soooo much better than the last few days.
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    lol im not getting in here only to read your poems..im getting in here to see your reply most importantly! im glad u are ok and you feeling better! what was going on? want to talk about it?

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    No. Better left unknown
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    Heres another famous one by...ME!!!! jking it aint famous... here it is:::

    "Drops of grey splash...
    The storm begins...
    But at this time, everythings so beautiful,
    Calm....
    Mysterious...
    Intriguing...

    Dark clouds warn me to stay away....
    But the arches of trees beckon me to continue.

    I listen to the screeching of winds.
    Feel the carresing of fallen leaves, flowing down.
    Smelling fresh rain as it comes.

    I shall continue...
    And wont be stopped..."

    Hoped you liked! not best....just got bored and wanted to.
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    vampy..u don't have to hope for me to like it..i love your poems and u know it! this one suits perfectly with the weather here in greece..and it reminds me those lonely days i had last christmas..i try for a poem..let's see hmm..

    all these people,
    all these families..
    all together

    why this now?
    why to me?
    a loneliness that freezing my heart,
    seems like it will last forever.

    you said u were my best friend,
    the brother i never had,
    and now im all alone in the middle of this december.

    im walking slowly in this cold rainy street..
    remembering your handsome face..
    your warm strong hug..
    .....and yet i feel so sad...

    keep walking..
    hearing laughs and watching happy people all around..
    this is christmas..this is night..

    ..it's time for me to strike back..it's time for my fight..

    your turn has ended..it's my turn now..
    i still need you..i still love you somehow..

    BUT NO!!
    the revenge is coming..no time for loving and forgiving now!!

    loool it took me 40 minutes to create it..i like it a lot..feel free to copy it if you want my friend!

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    Quote Originally Posted by TF.Denis View Post
    vampy..u don't have to hope for me to like it..i love your poems and u know it! this one suits perfectly with the weather here in greece..and it reminds me those lonely days i had last christmas..i try for a poem..let's see hmm..

    all these people,
    all these families..
    all together

    why this now?
    why to me?
    a loneliness that freezing my heart,
    seems like it will last forever.

    you said u were my best friend,
    the brother i never had,
    and now im all alone in the middle of this december.

    im walking slowly in this cold rainy street..
    remembering your handsome face..
    your warm strong hug..
    .....and yet i feel so sad...

    keep walking..
    hearing laughs and watching happy people all around..
    this is christmas..this is night..

    ..it's time for me to strike back..it's time for my fight..

    your turn has ended..it's my turn now..
    i still need you..i still love you somehow..

    BUT NO!!
    the revenge is coming..no time for loving and forgiving now!!

    loool it took me 40 minutes to create it..i like it a lot..feel free to copy it if you want my friend!
    WOW!! 40?!?!?! it takes me like around 20 at the max!!! im not bein mean....just find it funny

    and sorry about your last christmas.... it must have sucked...!
    Hope this year is better for you buddy...
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