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Lo
27th Sep 2008, 10:42
Time I made an entrance on the fanfic market :rasp:

Here goes for nothing. Feel free to add on if you think you're hard enough :lol:

Lara awoke with a start. There was something in the air and she sensed it profoundly. Outside, the fog was rapidly descending, making the tops of the assault course apparatus barely visible on this first autumnal morning of a difficult and tedious year.

Outside, Winston was planting the winter bulbs; his hands white and cracked and his breath frosty against the chill of the morning air. As Lara drifted down the manor staircase she noticed that the Grandfather clock had stopped at 4 o'clock. It was about that time the previous day that she had become aware of the distant howling of a wolf beyond Croft Manor gates.

Treading cautiously, Lara crept out onto the forecourt. However, her every footstep was audible to each living creature as she witnessed a flock of crows taking flight from a nearby tree and a fox fleeing from a perimeter hedge. Approaching the gate, she came across a trail of blood. There were no feathers, no fur, no remnants of a massacre at all. But the air carried with it a stench of death and there was no chance at all that Lara would allow any attrocity to occur within her immediate vicinity.

Cautiously, she.....

a_big_house
27th Sep 2008, 10:45
was eaten

tevin
27th Sep 2008, 11:40
:rasp: took out her guns and started shooting. THEN......
Time I made an entrance on the fanfic market :rasp:

Here goes for nothing. Feel free to add on if you think you're hard enough :lol:

Lara awoke with a start. There was something in the air and she sensed it profoundly. Outside, the fog was rapidly descending, making the tops of the assault course apparatus barely visible on this first autumnal morning of a difficult and tedious year.

Outside, Winston was planting the winter bulbs; his hands white and cracked and his breath frosty against the chill of the morning air. As Lara drifted down the manor staircase she noticed that the Grandfather clock had stopped at 4 o'clock. It was about that time the previous day that she had become aware of the distant howling of a wolf beyond Croft Manor gates.

Treading cautiously, Lara crept out onto the forecourt. However, her every footstep was audible to each living creature as she witnessed a flock of crows taking flight from a nearby tree and a fox fleeing from a perimeter hedge. Approaching the gate, she came across a trail of blood. There were no feathers, no fur, no remnants of a massacre at all. But the air carried with it a stench of death and there was no chance at all that Lara would allow any attrocity to occur within her immediate vicinity.

Cautiously, she.....

1q2q3q4q5q
27th Sep 2008, 12:14
Out of nowhere a dark figure suddenly descended down behind her, Lara turned to see it was....

tevin
27th Sep 2008, 12:23
:rasp: and when she looked it was natla tryin to kill her.....
Out of nowhere a dark figure suddenly descended down behind her, Lara turned to see it was....

1q2q3q4q5q
27th Sep 2008, 12:39
Lara quickly withdrew her gun and pointed it at Natla’s head she then fired but it had no effect,:eek: Natla then grabbed Lara at the neck...

a_big_house
27th Sep 2008, 12:50
a giant turd landed on natlas head then she melted the end:rasp:

tevin
27th Sep 2008, 12:56
:rasp: :rasp: :rasp: :rasp:
Lara quickly withdrew her gun and pointed it at Natla’s head she then fired but it had no effect,:eek: Natla then grabbed Lara at the neck...

Lo
27th Sep 2008, 20:53
But was it really the end? (Begs for mercy and more contributions :lol: ).

For the trusty old butler, Winston the Fourth, began a regimented and studious heart massage (If only he could get to her heart beneath a rather large lump :D :whistle: ).

Suddenly, Lara drew breath as opposed to pistols and with a distant look in her eyes, she gasped.....'What happened to my...

MissJess
27th Sep 2008, 22:21
But was it really the end? (Begs for mercy and more contributions :lol: ).

For the trusty old butler, Winston the Fourth, began a regimented and studious heart massage (If only he could get to her heart beneath a rather large lump :D :whistle: ).

Suddenly, Lara drew breath as opposed to pistols and with a distant look in her eyes, she gasped.....'What happened to my...

...Legs!" She said, noticing they were now made of...

Lo
28th Sep 2008, 05:26
Plasticine. She blamed Winston of course for injecting a deadly substance into her breakfast, which had consisted of...