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viZZiOn
6th Aug 2005, 10:55
allright then, since i thouroughly enjoyed the last think you can rap thread, i decided to make a new one, but this time in order to keep it open, NO [censor] BATTLES, things seem to have gotten out of hand after one battle on the other thread so all disses will be IGNORED
So if you write feel free to post, but keep in mind, this threads vegetarian, so keep the beef out

P.S. lil'breakdown i never had any personal problems with you, it was just a battle and thats how things go (direct translation-no more hatin')

marker227
6th Aug 2005, 17:06
LOL dude everyone is gonna starting fighting here once you know who comes in and starts something :rolleyes:

viZZiOn
6th Aug 2005, 21:18
haha, i have a feeling it will, but i'm hoping it wont

lilbreakdown
8th Aug 2005, 18:39
iiht homie i jus clearin he smoke up aka i was jus makein everything cool

im in to battle whit no beef or shiit ill post ma songs on ma demo here dont make a [censor] to me i already am signed to underground recording so yeah holla back :cool:

viZZiOn
8th Aug 2005, 19:18
thats word kidd, i'm lookin forward to seein your [censor] man, i've been working alot this last week or so, so i havent been able to write, i'm probably gonna record a demo by october, but i may have some mp3s that i'll post on here before then

lilbreakdown
8th Aug 2005, 19:20
damn [censor] i got mp3 ma demo and ma [censor] on here i dont know how to host it and ima get rid of them and put em on a cd here soon
we can collab on some [censor] for real or [censor] around
25 to life might put our [censor] on the cd lol

J-Hood
9th Aug 2005, 05:33
Music industry is a big business. I dont think I will take rappin to the next level by sending demos and stuff. Its just a hobby of mine and I kinda feel like studying people like (example) canibus was a waiste but ima have fun wit it durring this school yr. [Cant tell age =p I might be a youngin but remember beta testers are 18+] My cousin (dad's brother's son) is a rapper he got signed last month hes from ATL. His album is almost done COPPED that hs name is Craig but I dont know how his music is going along. Hopfully I will get to talk to him about his music next year. The dude produces some crazy beats. But If i COULD have a deal I'd go mainstream.

lilbreakdown
9th Aug 2005, 15:32
life is full of rage and anger aside you got thugs gangsters and bonie and clydes duet soul spitters and djs to the max shiit u get big u gon get stabber in da back i am gonna get out the hood soon bout 2 years 11 hours 32 minutes to be exact i wanna state a sory and get this fact when u live in da hood u get jumped beat shot and killed when u outside da hood u get fired thrown and yelled at to why do thugs go thru what rich people dont money buys fame power and will even by love god must be watchin us frome da heavens above see me and ma blood will stand up high we smoke weed and do drive buys i got to make it to heaven for all iv been thru shiit i look to god wonderin what to do



shiit aint good i had to get it off ma chest thou so yeah peace ~1~ :cool:

viZZiOn
10th Aug 2005, 12:33
not bad not bad, there was a few spots where it seemed like the flow was off, but since i'm gonna assume that that was freestyled nice

viZZiOn
10th Aug 2005, 12:40
wrote this little bit at work last night


so this is living life well i've decided that i hate it/
this breathing that y'all do, i've declared it over-rated/
you got no idea how many times suicide's been contemplated/
but this time i got a tec took off the saftey then i sprayed it/
untill i looked around and just saw bloody bodies on the pavement/
even though the day was lost the pigs still came to try to save it/
i eventually got got 9mm in the brain kid/
i had other [censor] to mention but since i'm dead guess i cant say it/
cause now i'm at a loss for words/
theres my suicide by officer/

(freestyled)

VideoGameMaster
10th Aug 2005, 14:56
wrote this little bit at work last night


so this is living life well i've decided that i hate it/
this breathing that y'all do, i've declared it over-rated/
you got no idea how many times suicide's been contemplated/
but this time i got a tec took off the saftey then i sprayed it/
untill i looked around and just saw bloody bodies on the pavement/
even though the day was lost the pigs still came to try to save it/
i eventually got got 9mm in the brain kid/
i had other [censor] to mention but since i'm dead guess i cant say it/
cause now i'm at a loss for words/
theres my suicide by officer/

(freestyled)


cool....better hope noone sees that at work..lol :eek: :D

viZZiOn
10th Aug 2005, 15:26
haha yeah good thing i remembered the piece of reciept tape i wrote it on

J-Hood
14th Aug 2005, 20:03
Edit: Nice raps yall.

VideoGameMaster
14th Aug 2005, 20:38
plz..no beef....it wasnt even directed towards you......mmm...beefy

Mike_B
14th Aug 2005, 20:58
AkumaDaimyo,

You're missed something in the thread title, the part between brackets. There's nothing wrong with not liking rap, but if I see something I don't like I generally don't get involve in something about that subject.

viZZiOn
14th Aug 2005, 22:31
:thumbsup: thanks for keeping kosher @m

lilbreakdown
20th Aug 2005, 03:59
im dat [censor] u dont know
im dat [censor] who flows
im da [censor] that grabs the mic and lets go



i spit lyrical verses 12 to 12 i put ma life ma [censor] ontop the shelve i carry the duece duce on the way to town ima blood we dont play around messin whit a g u gon get hurt [censor] u gon feel the pain ma verse will make u go lyricaly insane i own the game i tear emcee in shreds this verse is what brings in the bread 45 bars and 45 to go i slap wack emcee around like a derty crack hoe frome smokein to slangin agin to gettin clean and playin the himp ima pimp a nicha that always stay fly [censor] whit me [censor] u gon die



i dont know i jus spit that [censor] i am hlaf way asleep

viZZiOn
20th Aug 2005, 15:41
you shoould spit when you're half asleep more often, thats the best i've felt ya flow

http://s13.invisionfree.com/Emcee_Mayhem/index.php?act=idx

go there if you can rhyme/
forget this site we goin to the big times/

J-Hood
20th Aug 2005, 17:20
That link doesnt work for me. (broke)

viZZiOn
21st Aug 2005, 15:08
i posted the wrong link, i fixed it in the post though

VideoGameMaster
22nd Aug 2005, 19:45
i told u to stop takin them flinstone vitamins vizzion...dang boy..lol :cool:

viZZiOn
24th Aug 2005, 23:13
i cant help it.....i NEEEED THEM

lilbreakdown
31st Aug 2005, 23:59
DIS DA PLACE TO BE IF U A G
OR U A SHORTY OR A HOMIE
RELAX AND KEEP IT TRILL IIGHT 1


http://s13.invisionfree.com/lilrainman/

Killa_Marr
1st Sep 2005, 02:17
I rap , i do audios heres a link to one of my songs.

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendID=23609848&Mytoken=20050831182411

viZZiOn
1st Sep 2005, 12:45
nice track

i should have mp3s up fairly soon

Killa_Marr
1st Sep 2005, 18:44
word... hit me up if u want to internet collab

viZZiOn
9th Sep 2005, 16:37
yo marr

howed you get the music player onto myspace, i got some ****ty demo recordings done but cant get em up

SladeHino
10th Sep 2005, 03:11
Im new to this so when i get in this is just a freestyle for later on in the game

You im tired of all these punk $$$ pigs/
Comin in durin my trappin and makin me split some wigs/
Next doughnut muncher that steps tough to me/
They just cant shoot at what they just cant see/
Cause they blinded now with a stray 50 cal bullet/
Any other gangs think they tough man they just cant pull it/
So stay out my way and give me some recognition/
You dont know me now but im in your death vision/
The guy thats spraying gats and nines all day/
I trap so hard its plan as a hot sunny day/
One day i become rags to riches/
All you gangsta are straight punk snitches/
So stay away so i can chill/
Cause if you dont homie they will die/
And guess what homie i dont lie/
After i shoot you i kneel a pray/
Cause i know someone else is gonna die later today/
And i hate it for me cause i know its my fault/
But if you come to me then punk you better hault/
I dont play that game/
I dont scare and run/
All i need is my gang and my big $$$ gun/

This aint agianst anybody this is kinda an RP rhyme for future clans and cops in the game if you know what i mean

*** Edit to remove potentially offensive lyrics by admin, I wanted to make sure I kept the artistic integrity so I censored it with $$$ ***

ice13
10th Sep 2005, 04:56
soon wwe raw is coming to usa
and i will be watching spike looking at tna
stone cold makes his return
this is more than my concern
it is a 3 hour show
i just wanted u to know
the show will be exciting
i hope there is lots of fighting
and the return of triple h
wondering is gonna talk to his buddy nat
also hulk hogan
whatcha gonna do is his favorite slogan
aspect an appearance by vince mcmahon
i doubt he will shake anyone hand
i can't wait for the show to come on
this is my rap song
it comes on october the 3rd
word

marker227
10th Sep 2005, 05:02
the game comes out oct. third?

ice13
10th Sep 2005, 05:36
the game comes out oct. third?

no a wrestling show comes out october the third.

marker227
26th Oct 2005, 10:45
SladeHino


Dude rapping isn't all about ranting on the cops. 1st they aren't all fat.... 2nd, I'm sure you are smart enough to rap about other problems you are having in life or something. All they do is their job, like your mother or father. But your parents sometimes won't do what some cops do. Some won't turn you in if you had some drugs or said you broke a law.

(Examples)

viZZiOn
29th Oct 2005, 19:21
Im new to this so when i get in this is just a freestyle for later on in the game

You im tired of all these punk $$$ pigs/
Comin in durin my trappin and makin me split some wigs/
Next doughnut muncher that steps tough to me/
They just cant shoot at what they just cant see/
Cause they blinded now with a stray 50 cal bullet/
Any other gangs think they tough man they just cant pull it/
So stay out my way and give me some recognition/
You dont know me now but im in your death vision/
The guy thats spraying gats and nines all day/
I trap so hard its plan as a hot sunny day/
One day i become rags to riches/
All you gangsta are straight punk snitches/
So stay away so i can chill/
Cause if you dont homie they will die/
And guess what homie i dont lie/
After i shoot you i kneel a pray/
Cause i know someone else is gonna die later today/
And i hate it for me cause i know its my fault/
But if you come to me then punk you better hault/
I dont play that game/
I dont scare and run/
All i need is my gang and my big $$$ gun/

This aint agianst anybody this is kinda an RP rhyme for future clans and cops in the game if you know what i mean

*** Edit to remove potentially offensive lyrics by admin, I wanted to make sure I kept the artistic integrity so I censored it with $$$ ***

your vocab is decent in this rhyme, your structure and flow are weak (dont take offense) punchlines werent anything special and it didnt have an oh wow factor. still one of the better verses i've read from someone new to rhyming. try to get some multis in and dont try to force rhymes and you should be good

on a side note, i havent been posting any of my verses lately because i'm currently working on an album if all goes well it should be available by january or febuary

viZZiOn
3rd Nov 2005, 23:42
i havent text styled this, but if i decide to turn it into an actual song i might

i never seem to put forth the good times in my rhymes the stop signs in life have confined my emotions the cork in my bottle held up under pressure is about to explode with a force unmeasurable unfathomable how these dark bags under my eyes are a surprise to most the host of the party hasnt slept in weeks 4am still walk the streets of my ghost town theres no sounds except my rubber sole slappin the ground i pound another beer to drown out my fear to make me feel like the ones who aint here at least are near to the fire to stay warm i've been torn my decisions are useless my gloves worn cause these hands have left foes toothless ***** i've been fighting and the blunts i've been lighting dont make up for you but what can i do how could i have known what i had gotten into just another line to ease the pain just another slug lodged into my brain its all the same still stuck playin the game pills suck i'm still keeled over some can i but cant i'll never heal sober

Hatchetman702
7th Nov 2005, 16:37
hey vizzion did u sign up for that american idol spin off thing that ICP and twisted did?? that **** was funny...madrox is mean thou:( but shaggy was all ***** be quiet:) yeah those ninja's were good and madrox was hating for real:*( its alright though..

viZZiOn
7th Nov 2005, 17:34
nah, i didnt even know about that ****

Hatchetman702
8th Nov 2005, 04:56
lol its on faygolovers.com or net im not sure

EC_KING
9th Nov 2005, 05:09
lol. you guys are NUTZZZ. Nice idea. Also Our Ladder site will let Teams input a MP3 for about 30 sec or so on their Stats page. BUT you need enough XM money to buy the option. :eek: humm.. how do i get XM you ask? what else, Betting per match.. :D I though it would be a cool idea. any guess about what the setting for the mp3 should be? something that would just play once on coming into your clan stats page.

viZZiOn
6th Dec 2005, 07:00
i have two tracks up on myspace now....check them out (http://www.myspace.com/vizzionhiphop)

JerzeeKD
7th Dec 2005, 02:33
It's da ***** from jerzey here, here to rep his town/
Black ski mask, white T's, you know how we get down/
You can walk through my streets, see my hood is like a jungle/
You ain't even safe with ya set, they take ya bodies up in bundles/
And you know, ain't gonna be no snitches/
Rats are a dead race, you'll find em buried in ditches/
Straight gansta/
Got dudes in my hood willing to straight shank ya/
And don't try to stand to me, I out rank ya/
Put a shot in a dude, loot em, and say thank ya/
Yea, cuz you know what I do/
And if you don't better learn to stay clear of this dude/
Cuz he ain't the one the screw with/
They find ya body, and inside, they can find two clips/
One in ya skull, and one in ya heart/
Both vital areas cuz i planned on killing you from the start/
And I know, war can get started with a line or two/
But I know, that I can end it with a nine or two/
So check all beef thats aimed towards me/
Cuz the kid takes no **** and stays equiped with the heat/

Something I just made up now. Not meant for anyone. Tell me how it is to yall.

312 gangsta
20th Dec 2005, 05:14
Now don't think I won't hit ya 'cause I'm popular
I got a P90 Ruger, gonna pop at ya
Catch ya slippin', I'mma give ya what I got for ya
My clip loaded with 16 shots for ya
You never had a hot gun on your waste and blood on your shoe
'Cause a ***** went and said the wrong **** to you
Homie you ain't been through, what I been through
You not like me and I'm not like you
I'm like an animal with it when I spit it, it's crazy
Got semi-autos and put holes in *****s tryna play me
One shot is not enough, you need at least an uzi to move me
After four bottles of "Don," the kid start feelin' woozie
I write my life, you write what you see in gangsta movies
I'm gangsta to the core, ***** you can't move me
I find my space at the top
I got this rap **** locked
I never heard of you, you heard of me
I murder you, spit shells at your convertible
Lotus, you notice
Rich or poor, hollows still go through your door
This is war
You scared of me, you not prepared for me
The kid is back, luny crip
I know you like that, yea I know you like that

Hersey
21st Dec 2005, 05:56
I'm a Muthaf***ing Canadian
Your going here my muthaf***ing name again
Cause i'm a plague like the muthaf***ing asian,

Cause it's all that i know
the b**** and the hoe
it's what I like
doing it all day and night
never goin to stop
screw being caught
Cops dont look at me
and when they do its from my mac 3

people know their place and you should know yours
or you might be on the recieving end with painful sorz

--------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is more poetry than rap but:

I went into the bar
the target not far
all on my mind
was "I kill his kind"
a f***ing s*** disturber
a f***ing gangsta burgler
he didn't give it back
so he deals with a mac
taking his soul
for the money he stole
no fealing of remorse
my heart too course
from always offing
f***** who walk in
my f***ing hood
so leave when you should
or i'll come a knocking
to your house no stopping
to kill all but the pets
which ill leave screaming when I set
your house a burn
your ashs to urn
so now you know
not to **** with the 2-5-0
--------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ok gangsta's it's the 5-0's turn now...

Why you always run from us
you p**** f***** shush
stop screaming you f***ing piece
"f*** The Police"
Well if you want some
come and get some
we'd love to take you all at once
their'd be no crime for months
you sorry excuses of people
finally got visited by the reaper
it's what you deserved
your place already reserved
so bring it gangsta
and bring it wanksta
it's all trash anyways
so smoke it up and blaze
and get some balls
and lets see what fate calls

--------------------------------------------------------------------------

Headz or Tailz?
Your choices all sharez
cause everyone is afraid
im so totally made
from my life of gangstery
it's such a thriving industry
I dont just run a city, I run the world
It was never sold
I made the mold
You can't be bold
when facing death in the eyez
you wouldnt be to wise
so headz or tailz?
death by knife or nailz?
your call dont bother mez
your just 1 in a hive of beezs

JerzeeKD
24th Dec 2005, 18:06
Now don't think I won't hit ya 'cause I'm popular
I got a P90 Ruger, gonna pop at ya
Catch ya slippin', I'mma give ya what I got for ya
My clip loaded with 16 shots for ya
You never had a hot gun on your waste and blood on your shoe
'Cause a ***** went and said the wrong **** to you
Homie you ain't been through, what I been through
You not like me and I'm not like you
I'm like an animal with it when I spit it, it's crazy
Got semi-autos and put holes in *****s tryna play me
One shot is not enough, you need at least an uzi to move me
After four bottles of "Don," the kid start feelin' woozie
I write my life, you write what you see in gangsta movies
I'm gangsta to the core, ***** you can't move me
I find my space at the top
I got this rap **** locked
I never heard of you, you heard of me
I murder you, spit shells at your convertible
Lotus, you notice
Rich or poor, hollows still go through your door
This is war
You scared of me, you not prepared for me
The kid is back, luny crip
I know you like that, yea I know you like that

Thats 50 Cent's part of the Till I Collapse Remix

312 gangsta
25th Dec 2005, 00:17
atleast you know your music on on ealse came on to it bout time took long enough jus comes a show ya half these people could be fakes n no on payz attention

Hersey
25th Dec 2005, 01:13
im sure alot of peopel new they just didn't bother posting :rolleyes:

viZZiOn
25th Dec 2005, 01:53
atleast you know your music on on ealse came on to it bout time took long enough jus comes a show ya half these people could be fakes n no on payz attention

i just ignore biters like yourself, you could have at least taken a bite out of something good

JerzeeKD
25th Dec 2005, 02:49
50 Cent part of that till i collapse remix is good.

viZZiOn
25th Dec 2005, 05:49
to each thier own, i have no respect for 50, so i cant stand any of his music

312 gangsta
25th Dec 2005, 13:57
50 is in ok one i mean when he dose remixes n jus spits a few bars its amzing but when he dose hole songs its boring

J-Hood
25th Dec 2005, 16:53
LOOK AT THIS SONG I MADE

[VERSE 1]

There's never been a ***** this good for this long
This hood
Or this pop is hot
Or this strong
With so many different flows
This ones for this song
The next one i'll switch up
This one will get bit up
These ****s
To lazy to make up ****
They crazy
They don't...paint pictures
They just trace me
You know what
Soon they forget who they plucked
They whole style from
And try to reverse the outcome
I'm like...CLUCK
I'm not a biter
I'm a writter
For myself and others
I say a B.I.G. verse i'm only biggin up my brother
Biggin up my borough
I'm big enough to do it
I'm that therough
Plus i know my own flow is foolish
So the rings and things you sing about
Bring em out
It's hard to yell when the bar-rel's in your mouth
I'm in...New sneakers
Deuce seaters
A few Diva's
What more can i tell you
Let me spell it for you
W-I-Double L-I-E
Nobody truer than H-O-V
And i'm back for more
New Yorks ambassador
Prime Minister back to finish my business up


[VERSE 2]

DJ Paul is a dog, one you do not trust
You leave your green around me
***** your green gonna get lit up
You leave your drink around me
Believe your drink gonna get drunk up
You leave your girl around me
And she bet she gonna get stuffed
These *****s is spies we living it live keep them nice tires
Ridin around what they like
Make a couple of nuns a couple of dimes
Its purple purp purple purp purple and swallow it down
with the yurple yip yurple yip yurples
its goin down!

:)

Hersey
27th Dec 2005, 00:12
Sweeet

J-Hood
27th Dec 2005, 02:14
copy and pasted lyrics. *coughs and waits for somone to say somthin*

theeGhettOsnyper
28th Dec 2005, 16:15
Yo my name is bob
but you can call me bub
you better watch out
or ill poke you with my nub
i like roller skatin
but homie dont be hatin
i also like cheetos
and graffiti finger paintin
maybe when aliens destroy the earth
you will believe me
when i said that cheetos are not
so dangerously cheesy
as the bag says
cuz whats so dangerous
about a cheeto
us leprechauns say nothin but hey what do we know
we’re just short people
in green suits
and we dont know anything
except for about fruits
but what do fruits
have to do with cheetos
i dont know
and how is finger paintin
connected with homie hatin
it aint’n
who with the name of bob
goes by bub
no one i know
thats the only cool word that rhymes with nub
so which of these things
are similar to the other
i dont think any of em are
so go ask your mother
now we’re nearing the end
of this nothin song
so one last thing before i go
im wearin a thong
:cool: :thumbsup:

JustinTheGamer
31st Dec 2005, 02:17
nice lmao :D :thumbsup:

Hersey
1st Jan 2006, 02:57
to each thier own, i have no respect for 50, so i cant stand any of his music

50cent used a 13 year old girl to sell his drugs for him and he used to be fat until he got shot in the mouth and then he lost weight from not being able to eat solid food.

J-Hood
1st Jan 2006, 06:44
How old was he when he had a 13 yr old girl sell drugs? 13? (No stan) Why would he have somone to sell it if he was a dealer himself? NO he got big from "steroids" :D

JerzeeKD
1st Jan 2006, 22:35
Ey yo kick back
While I spit tracks hotter than ever
I'm a hustler, do anything to get that chedder
Cuz paper the only thing on my mind
Tracks so hot, I can make it using the same rhyme
Style so sick
Got christian ******* hoppin the stick
Cuz the kid, he something like a diamond in the rough
Yea I got diamonds, but not one of em you can touch
Mess with my chain,and mutha ****** you'll get cut up
Kid from Jerzey so you know he don't play
Come to my block, ***** won't last a day
In my hood,they call me something like a boss
Battle a dude, after one bar he already lost
Crowd cheering for me like god **** he hot
And yea you try and be me, but god **** you not
Bars comming to my head so fast I can't stop em
Dudes talking to much, and I'm about ready to pop em
The world revolves around me, you can call me the sun
So keep ya head up dude and you should try not to stunt

aemboy15
5th Jan 2006, 19:54
This is not dissin' anybody, just a quick rap.

Ayo **** all fake thugz, its true Blood/
You get no pitty from me, only hot slugz/
In the hood we get no paychecks so we slang drugz/
We stay on tha streets and put in as much work as Game dose/
Or did, now he is in tha spotlight G/
We stay fresh with tees, jeans, and hot nikes/
The **** we be slangin is droe and it B jive/
When we B bangin, you best not dis the 5/
Or your body will be hangin and your family will not survive/
Kill a ¢rab Hommie Kuz we real Piru/
So show some love unless you want hollow tips up in you/

I'm not a rapper.

killaf00l
9th Jan 2006, 23:27
i rhyme all tha time,
i do it on a dime,
if you dont watch it ill put 1 in your chest,
an you'll it tha ground like tha rest,
and you thought you where tha best,
but i put you to tha test,
an you couldnt pass it just like tha rest,
now you've been put to rest.

PC Snake_EYEZ
10th Jan 2006, 01:26
50cent used a 13 year old girl to sell his drugs for him and he used to be fat until he got shot in the mouth and then he lost weight from not being able to eat solid food.


Actually 50 Cent lost all his weight from being shot 9 times and having to do rehab. I am sure not being able to eat solids will make you loose weight but I am sure you don't get that much muscle from not eating solids. But lets not make this into some big stink, who really cares unless you want to eat some lead to loose weight.

viZZiOn
13th Jan 2006, 02:58
How old was he when he had a 13 yr old girl sell drugs? 13? (No stan) Why would he have somone to sell it if he was a dealer himself? NO he got big from "steroids" :D

if he was smart he would have pushers out taking all the risks for him so he didnt have to worry about gettin himself bagged, you can tell that 50 did get that big from steroid use, because its ****in easy to tell when someones on guerilla juice, and **** all a yall

thats it for tonight

J-Hood
13th Jan 2006, 20:23
Btw I pasted my lyrics from JayZ and 3 6, Very surprised no1 from this board said I was a biter of Jay :cool:

lilbreakdown
15th Jan 2006, 16:20
bored thought id jus post sometin on her




its life on a mizzion and im goin to get them dead presidentz//
the feds on ma ass but they aint gettin no evadince//
first kid to blast whit no hesitation no im markin these catz like luther kingz patience//
i was tought to play hoes like a playstation//
im only 16 and its me aginst the nation//
to be on top of the world is ma destination//
back to reality four fith will put a whole in ya body and cause a trvisty//
holows tips hit and buck up ya chest cavity//
like ya drunk a whole bottle of hinasy **** ma enamys//
life game tite like a virgin if its that time of the month the hoe squirtin//
if its that tme of the month more then blood squirtin she gon need more then a pad//
he gon need more then a bag chop em up and lay em on the bush//
but that enough of the ***** i aint even ****ina ***** aint even nutin a *****//
all i did was bust in her mouth u got suntin to say teeth is fallin cause im bustin em out *****//


**** jus freestyled tell me what ya peoples think 1

xplicit
15th Jan 2006, 23:37
where wuz i for this forum???

delinkwent
20th Jan 2006, 19:01
ayo its delinkwent you could see where i ran through//
diss me,my boys will come straight for ya head like shampoo//
when you battle me it aint a war its a burial//
forget fightin,i'll serve you in the POST like cereal//
im in jersey,the garden state,my rhymes'll make a plant bloom//
i live my life like ANIMAL HOUSE,my flow is National like Lampoon//
i rhyme tight getting new bucks,always gettin new sluts//
i'm in a clan like socom,you in a clan like ku klutz//
so im not for talking,you poppin gums like you got no teeth//
remember this is a vegetarian verse,so theres no beef//

just a little keystyle.........

Hersey
2nd Feb 2006, 01:10
It's the self proclaimed, Shady Junior
He who must not be named, Comming sooner
after a man that did it all
through the law and the bar
experienced as a life delinquent
you'd never think it
so im next in the line
hold a nine
not to you but to me
a crazy psycho B
boo or cheer, i dont care
you be near, when im there
see that im that next slim
the Devils kin
rapping about your mom
and how my d*** is so long
joking about deaths
and womens breasts
and then changing it to slow beat
so i can reach and meet
you at a personal level
for you to understand the several
things ive been through
things im going to do...

Thats my wishes in lines
put together in rhymes
for people to chill too
hopefully its real coo(l)
Peace until next time
another rhyme put to line.

YoungGunna22
2nd Feb 2006, 04:37
u on 25tl n u think u hard but n real life u like a snake....udont carry no arms

viZZiOn
2nd Feb 2006, 08:12
iight i guess my thread starting picking up again

love to spray AK clips at a snitch ***** like yourself ****in around is bad for your health puttin cartrides in you like you super nintendo now your dead and i'm still smokin endo and the lakes where they'll find you if ya life was a tape its to late to rewind you while you was alive your girl double timed you with me cant you see i'm a beast sent to **** up your week by week turns to months i cant front allways get what i want no matter the cost no matter the loss to someone else gotta take **** a slice gimme the whole ****in cake its apparent that parents are obviously oblivious underestimating these just out of city G's moving keys in our sleep cause we gotta eat well its well known that when we get blown step into unkown eating pounds of fungus all caps no bones catch you alone in your home get sneaky with the silenced semi that still rattles like a hemi mother ****er

(freestyled)

Hersey
2nd Feb 2006, 21:56
Me and Basil we up in this b****
say the s*** we want to get rich
people know about us up in the Vic
when we drop palms it's all sick
rapping about
crime no doubt
tight with the street
keeping the beat
in a rapping group
stacking the loops
of rhymes
in these times
of killing and dealing
stealing and feeling
hot chicks up
making them suck
playing em down low
till we get some mo(re)
but thats too dirrty
ill stop being flirty
till next time
another rhyme

OgdanC
4th Feb 2006, 08:37
If ya piss me off I'm a pull out my schlong
stick it in ya mouth and work it real Dam long
and if ya not home i'll do it to your mom
that ho aint home i find your nasty sister
pop on tha poon like i pop on a blister



yeah on the real
recognize fool

_Soulja_
7th Feb 2006, 21:00
www.soundclick.com/theshowcan

also appearing on Dj Big Mike presents LetsBeef.com The Mixtape Vol. 1

haha im sick wit it....

J-Hood
8th Feb 2006, 01:25
Soulja so your officaly on Big Mike's mixtape? if so thats cool

Hersey
8th Feb 2006, 02:43
The 25 community got it onz,
spitting rhymes and dropping palmz
when you drop it like it's hot
its pretty ****ing hot
when you lean back
theres no lack
of skillz from you
its all new
comming from the east coast
comming from the west coast
all good from south or north
its good **** you put forth
l-o-l the **** we say
you won't last another day(except for meaning to be funny :D )
crazy beats done for now
I got the pope starting to bow ;)

_Soulja_
9th Feb 2006, 19:56
yessir..

also check out

http://www.myspace.com/theshowcan

Hersey
10th Feb 2006, 19:02
Jumpin',flyin' and n**** hopin',
always runnin' never walkin',
over the fences,
not using sences,
sick if you watch,
we'll step it up a notch,
doin 'Prince a Persia' style
off the walls, all the while
looking f****in' sweet
makin' you want to skeet
its free runnin' b****
your lucky for the hitch ;)

Hersey
11th Feb 2006, 20:23
Here be me
a crazy G
wanting to kill the rich
and give to the poor
making people my b****
and makin em soar
the streetz breath through one mouth
and that mouth will be fed
stop me and get a paw from the south
than you'll be breathing red

Hersey
12th Feb 2006, 03:18
Shady is comming
you cant stop him
you better start runnin'
he'll kill you on a whim
not caring who ya are
he'll chase yah with a car
he cant be stopped
he wont be stopped

happy retirement
so heres a letter sent

RuThLeS_LoC
12th Feb 2006, 04:18
since ya'll rap , i got beatz on my soundclick , got them westcoast beatz!!!!
so if ya'll wanna hear em' post bacc n ill post my page!!!!

J-Hood
12th Feb 2006, 06:56
ruthless post em ^

JamRid
12th Feb 2006, 13:37
a verse inspired by this game :D dedicated to my enemies. kinda beefy after all.

Now in my younger days i used to sport a rag
Backpack full of cans plus a four-four mag
G'd from the feet up
Blued up from the sewer's how i grew up
Loc'n, smokin and drinkin til we threw up
At the apartment park, taggin, hittin fools up
Ditchin my class, just to f**k yo' school up
You don't wanna blast, ni**a tuck yo' tool up
But don't sleep, y'all ni**az quick to shoot you
Now there's another motherfu**er with no future.

RuThLeS_LoC
12th Feb 2006, 16:47
here u go! hope ya'll lik em

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=417147

Hersey
13th Feb 2006, 20:49
It's time to start listenin'
There's no use resistin'
Theres a speaker infront
And he's talkin about the best thin(g)
What the hood is like
What happens at night
What happens in allys
and not to mess with Cali's
Selling alot of narcotics
To all the attics
That are worth the best
and all the rest
The speakers gone for now
till next time, ciao

J-Hood
14th Feb 2006, 23:19
Nice beats they sound like west-coast criss-cross beats.

Hersey
16th Feb 2006, 00:17
It's again the real showstopper
Not a candy a** windowshopper
Im still rapping not wanting to stop
My rhymes sick, and always on top
Since the game sucked, it don't matter
Im not f****ed, i'll keep the chatter
I feel free when im rhymin here
Like drinkin' alot of stylin' beer
Loose in the shoulders
I could push boulders
Openin' my lips, to say what Im wantin
Hopefully it rips, the holes in others rantin
Whether i'm a true G
Or as I said, a crazy psycho B
Don't matter cause it makes me happy
Not trying to sound sappy
Buts it's the way i am
Like slim said
Don't give a damn
Even if you are wed
So here i was again
Let's hear you now men

Hersey
17th Feb 2006, 05:15
nevermind...

_Soulja_
18th Feb 2006, 03:39
www.myspace.com/theshowcan

www.soundclick.com/theshowcan

Hersey
22nd Feb 2006, 03:27
It's that time again, for me to speak
the time when, I start to leak
my thoughts out at ya
but it don't matta
cause i'm probably out, if others don't come
im going to shout, for others not dumb
to start spittin it
from the heart not givin a s***
im doing these like a ADHD kid
my mouth don't have a lid
just pure flow with the go
keeping low n givin show
if i have to i'll start some beef
talk s*** like you a dirty thief
it might just be a word, but im desperate
to hear others heard, so im goin to try n not let
this topic crash n burn like the game did
maybe you like it and you want to get rid
of this accussation
make a presentation
in your own words why this game is good
show me why it really could
be the game of all time
make it shine
outa the best
and all the rest
well that's my plead
other rappin' is what I nead

Al CapOWN
22nd Feb 2006, 07:40
Heres my site containg 3 mixtapes dat are in da progress...ALL PROMOTIONAL USE...NO exclusive rights to the beats but chea enjoy...


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pageartist.cfm?bandID=398298

Al CapOWN
22nd Feb 2006, 07:45
Text...

V.S. SwItCh

Ight Ight...

Im Shining-Red-Lights, beatin me??? This "Herb-Never-Do" thinkin **** Lien-Dead-Right...
So its only Right dat against Switch im gittin my "Third-W" like i was Buyin-A-Website...~1~
Shed-Size so realize quick, youll get a "Rushed-Side-Pain" like david Blane-Sneakers...
The Same-Heaters that left "Guys-Slain", wouldnt "Touch-My-Grain" if u was Pain-Reliever...~2~
"Crush-My-Name" c'mon stop "Breathin-Snitch" cuz u no the Man-Is-Deadly...
And now watch how ToNy's "Eating-Switch" like junks out and my Plans-Is-Healthy...~3~
I Jam-Da-Wealthy and never "Rest-Under-U-B" cuz u wont Serve-Me-Better...
Gotta Murky-Tempor and no ones feelin "S-W's-Heat" like seein Jersey-Weather...~4~
Go Earn-Me-Cheedar you *****...you "Here...-Hell-Man" you leave None-Scarred...
So in this tourny ock u like bad "Beer-Sails-Man" you cant even hold One-Bar...~5~
You Done-Charred im Un-Harmed and u "Un-Armed" fams ya Moves-Is-Happy...
Dude-Is-Crappy so fams u wanna "Lounge-Hard" 2 bad u like that Dude-In-Ya-Avy...~6~
Never Snatch-Me... u just a "***got-Stackin-Ways" to ramble u just Factual-*****...
Ya name like mine but seein "Washington-Catchin-Aids" is da only way da Capitols-SIC...~7~

Easy...



Expos:
~1~ I beat him once In a 1Bar, and 5 Bar...This will be my 3rd W gainst him...www.sfds.com...
~2~ My Grain like my stature...Migrane like a headache theres pain reliever for that...
~3~ Eating switch...Like a change or a diet...CHea...
~4~ SWitch...South West...Oppisite is Norh East...Like jersey...Jersey aint feelin SW weather...Chea...
~5~ All he do is battle 1 Bar battles and he lost half so i pokin at that...Chea think bout it...
~6~ Hes Loungin hard at me...NO HOMO...and so is that dude in his ay and hes gettin rejected andwit me he aint gittin a win...
~7~ SwItCh...SIC...Capitols...Washington DC nations capitols so overall he aint sic until den...LMAO...


V.S. Special K

Ight Ight...

Im Seakin-Time Koed u once so the "Best-Weapons" wont help u to have me Leakin-Slime...
Im nice and its funny ud think i go "Against-Ethics" the way i don spit Weak-End-Rhymes...~1~
Ya Meanings-Lie kid u wont "Attack-On-Finals" won happen ull never Sneek-My-Joint...
U Think-Im-Moist text aint u, puttin ya "Tracks-On-Vynel" only time ya Beats-On-Point...~2~
Relax-My-Style is rough just accept and let ya "Life-Go" u never Declared-A-Chance...
Paired-To-Dance wit da devil and its only right my bars give an "Eyeful" like Paris-France...~3~
Charish this much den stop cuz "Who-Makes-You-Raw" so c god this Robberies-Ritchous...
Not a Might-Miss, im on so watch cuz "You-K-Will-Fall" like Jan. 25th and Property-Prices...~4~
Egnite-This never fam...Honestly i "Ran-Hell-****" so another novice this a Walk-Through...
They'll Chalk-You noing my fist hard and wit ur "Hands-Youll-Split" like Spalk-Do...~5~
So Talk-Dude cuz u "Listed-Hardly-Rockin" and im sayin, u aint SHowed-Us-Much...
Ya SHoudlas-Crush cuz fam u like "Chris-Farley-Boxing" weight but cant Throw-A-Punch...~6~
And i No-Its-Much but yet im let u 'Eat-Rounds" and a knife fight im the Best-Shanking...
Get "Beat-Down" and dis battle K u "Three-Down" like the SEC-Rankings...~7~

Easy...



Expos:
~1~ This is the weekend...ANd im sayin his pnches always have weekends...Chae think bout it...
~2~ He makes beats...For dem to b on point theyd need to be vynel cuz they play with the needle...CHEA...
~3~ Eyeful Tower...Ifel...Chea...
~4~ U "K" speacial K...The Uk was running second in like proerty prices and finally fell out the running on January 25th...
~5~ SPALK...SPeciAL K...Spok the guy from star track use to do the thing with his hands...Where hed split and hold em up...Chea think bout it...
~6~ CHris Farley had that Beverily Hills Nija or whatever...Where he was a retarded nija that sucvkewd ass...WELL SPecial K finally ranked up in "WEIGHT" (FARLEY) but due to number of battles and very week % of wins...Thikn bout It...
~7~...KU...Kentucky University...Theyre sittin 3rd in the East of the Sec...3 DOwn like 3 votes to KO Him...CHea...


V.S. DiAlEcK

Ight iGHT...

Body will "Leak-Well" and wacth Leck "Meet-Hell" fams u Lost-Went-Wit-Much-Now...
Should have quit cuz wit me watch "D-L-Fail" like scoring Offensive-Touchdowns...~1~
Ya Lunch-Now and theres no "Closure-Ta-Scars" theres no Heal-Zone-Fixture...
Get da Picture cuz its easy for me to go "Ova-Ya-Bars" like FIeid-Goal-Kickers...~2~
Figures??? never say CREAM c'mon u "Live-Ta-See-Sails" fams i Cannon-The-Weakest...
Kid u facin ToNy, he aint hidden so its only right he'll "Give-A-D-L's" like Handin-Out-Secrets...~3~
Man-Ya-Mouth-Weakins da "Heat-Sweep-Eye-Ways" watch as these Pair-Of-Hits-Move...
Never Miss-You so watch Tony "Beat-D-I-A" like he was apart of some Terrorist-Groups...~4~
Care-If-It-Do cuz fams u weak this "WHore-Soft" youll never Stack-A-Phase...
Relax-U-Gay u aint hard ill make you "More-Soph" then juniors goin Back-A-Grade...~5~

Easy...



Expos:
~1~ DL=Defensive Line...Chea Offensive TD would beat DL..."D"ia"L"eck...
~2~ FG kickers kick over the crossbars...I kick over his bars...CHea...
~3~ DL=Down Low a secret...Given "D"ialeck a L...Chea...
~4~ DIA=Defense Integence Agency...They protect us from war groiups and terriost organizations...Chea..."Dia"leck...Chea...
~5~ More Soph=Soph More...If juniors fell back they b Sophmore...Chea...


Audio...


V.S. PayBack

Fams u a ***** nervous as ****...Serve dis punk...
Watch ToNy happy to get pay like its da 1st of da month...~1~
Courage is touched circled once like the rims turn two...
U a doorman bassmint dont wanna here an interns view...~2~
Simpler moves here 4 ever u take on step at a time...
Shat girl aint gonna be da only one taken shots to da mind...~3~
Movin blind so test me and what him do...Pause there...
Cuz ToNy will X-P like the windos software...~4~

Props where..Stop there mids concernin...
You a mime thats turnin ya talk got no one lreanin...~5~
Put in words man only feed is when u concerned man...
So of course i gott put out p like my urine was burnin...~6~
Perve man given head just to gay ya mind layed out...
Fade out bassmints back got tired takein the spine out...~7~
Time out wit a line proud This my best writtin ever...
But ya spot got no drops like sunny weather...~8~

(Beat Switch)

Whats the difference how bout respect witta listen...
Watch the bassmint lose PAY like its check was missin...~9~
Chin Check this mission Pure anger its liable fiction...
Just *****in only a bull in his mind like chicago fitteds...~1o~
Block Those pitches so go drop some writtins...
That might get feed like ethopians that were wishin...~11~
Burn with in as i sit and my mind tunrs to spin...
Kids half the time he gets feed its him uppin for him...~12~
So watch Pay Leaf like was lunchin on hemp...
I lunched and fed grabbed yeste and stuffed his bread...~13~
Enough u 2 explode is like how soul usta be dead...
Wont happen u 8 teens work on gettin ya flows red...~14~
Worst den beds slept on like bums and curbish ends...
Words said u tryin to make it through like u tunred da benz...~15~
Words will send Letters to P like puns closet kin....
Close to this kid not even if we was birthed as twins...~16~

Easy...

Expos:
~1~ 1st of the month...U no checks u recieve...Chea...Ima eat Pay...
~2~ Circled once...We battled but id dint post in time...This is turn two...When i said i was holding interviews i siad to PM if u wanted to be the next one...Well he did...Bu hes a doorman...U no like he does work for epople...Intern...An INTERsview...Interview...
~3~ Look at his member title, and his sig...Then look at the avey of that girl...Shes holdin a glass thats level with her mind...Shots to the mind...She wont be the only one...
~4~ Windows XP...I take out (X) Payback...
~5~ Look at half of his drops...THEY get no feed...Mimes arnt herd cuz they dont talk...Hes not herd...
~6~ Liek fires...U put them out...Chea...Again taken out Payback...
~7~ Given head...His brain is gettin Laid...Bassmints Back...got tired/slept on...Hes been slept on...
~8~ "My Best Written Ever" He had a drop called "My Best Writtin Ever"...One person dropped somtin in there...When theres sun theres usally no rain/drops...
~9~ After this battle pay will lose the BASSMINT tags...Bassmint loses pay...U no like pay checks get lost...
~1o~ "Pure Anger" He had another writtin called "Pure Anger" but yet it got no fake...He thinks he hard/bull in his mind...Chicago fitteds are worn on the head...DUH...
~11~ Ethopians are starving for food/feed...So are half of his audios and wrttins...LMAO...
~12~ Look at over half of his drops...It rare he gets over 5 responses...AND when de does half of em are him Uppin the topic for feed...
~13~ Pay Leaf/Leave....Hemp like weed...AHHA u no...
~14~ For him to go back wont happen...DeadMan Walkin is no that Mal Soul guy...He has 18teen thousand posts...ate teens...How when half his drops get again NO FEED...
~15~ "Tryin To Make It Through" is a song by BENZino 2pac and Freddie Foxx...Half his drops are about hardships and makin it through...None of them get feed...
~16~ My words will send "Letters to P"...Cuban Link was Puns closet Kin/family...He has a song called Letter To Pun...He would be close to this kid if we was born as twins...

_Soulja_
23rd Feb 2006, 22:16
www.myspace.com/theshowcan

www.soundclick.com/theshowcan

Hersey
3rd Mar 2006, 01:15
Just for the record, all of my rhymes have been freestyled....

Tick tock, lets make the fun not stop.
Click clack, we're under attack.
Bullets everywhere, this way and that
start to not care, and your head goes splat
crippin it up, bloodz to the grave
hittin them up, fuzz will try n save
but it's useless, cause the city aint run by them
you ruthless, death to them, you condem
what a nice atmosphere
no one being sincere
oh well thats life overthere
now do you care?

ps. no this isnt some hippy thing, it just turned out like this.

_Soulja_
3rd Mar 2006, 22:58
www.myspace.com/theshowcan

www.soundclick.com/theshowcan

Hersey
9th Mar 2006, 01:15
Let's get the club boucin', no need announcin'
just get in there and spit it, loose control n make a fit
crunked to the max, drink to relax
start to bounce
like you on a double ounce
keep going, on the dance floor
not slowing, you know you want more
get the beat n keep the grindin'
all the heat'll start the unwindin
tell the DJ to turn it up
n when he does
spike his drink then steal the cup
get f****ed for more fun
make yah tired like the 8 mile run
use E if yah want, then get more baked
your head will haunt, you with a headache
but it'll be totally worth it
use and you'll admit
after the rampage
it was worth the brain damage
pay homage
for my garbage
then you'll see me in a Escalade
so totally made
shining my bling in every direction
my cell gonna ring for the allstar selection
"Hell no, i'm to good for that Bub"
the next day back in the club
crunked, f****ed, and baked
bounce, jump, and shake
all night's too short
never abort
this song's a keeper
keep it in the speaker
and now i'm outy, for the moment
keep it roudy, my parole went.

Hersey
22nd Mar 2006, 06:01
Back cause im bored, to much school,
oh lord, pitty me the fool,
im slacking and my rhymes suck,
im lacking skills and not givin a f***,
cause im bored as i said,
all the raps ive read,
to many times to count,
rhymes are like blood and im the count,
starting to ammount,
bloods not as tasty this time around,
oh well i guess it was bound,
to happen like this,
the sweet bliss,
oh well ill be gone for another long period,
back again to being a real kid,
to school and behon(d),
its time to run along.

WeBeOwnin
14th Apr 2006, 04:03
Back cause im bored, to much school,
oh lord, pitty me the fool,
im slacking and my rhymes suck,
im lacking skills and not givin a f***,
cause im bored as i said,
all the raps ive read,
to many times to count,
rhymes are like blood and im the count,
starting to ammount,
bloods not as tasty this time around,
oh well i guess it was bound,
to happen like this,
the sweet bliss,
oh well ill be gone for another long period,
back again to being a real kid,
to school and behon(d),
its time to run along.
yall *****s wack

Hersey
20th Apr 2006, 04:12
edited....