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GonarTrvig
12th Aug 2014, 16:41
Well, I said days ago in the Roleplaying Threat that I would eventually open this topic if no one else did that before, so... Here I am! :D This threat is to post the stories and information about those Nosgoth or LoK original characters you thought. They can be either new or old, it doesn't matter! Just show off your babies like the proud momma/daddy/god/whatever you are!

Just saying that, if you see that your post is going to be long, to don't make it too annoying to scroll past, put the long stories under a Quote. Specially if, like me, you have totes of ocs! ;). Also, images are allowed, either your own art or by using an avatar generator. As soon as the images are under the norms of size and so, it's fine.

And so, I'm starting with all my bunch. I introduced three in the other topic, but in those last days I had time to think in even more, and to extend the stories of the first ones, so beware!

Also, note that, even if I may write really long stories right now, it's not need to do them so long. So don't shy yourself if you have not so many details about your babies! :) And, of course, opinions and feedbacks are appreciated too ;)

And, of course, I'm starting with:

Ilakim:

Ilakim is a vampire from the clan Razielim, and so a Sentinel. Like the rest of the youngsters, he was locked in the secret vault with them while pupating, being his mentor Alexandra, one of the elders, the one who, once more, took care of him and made sure the "children" would be fine. Once they awoke and, after decades, managed to make their way out of the secret vault, deformed and thirsty, Ilakim couldn't join the reconnaissance party. Instead he waited with the rest, fighting to keep the last remains of his sanity even when, later, they travelled to which was supposed to be their clan territory. Once they were obliged to serve the other clans in exchange of food and protection from Dumah and Turel, Ilakim turned to be even more suspicious of his "allies" than ever. Even few of those members of other clans who could be considered something similar to "friends" were traitors under his eyes. Of course, he understood that they were following orders from their creators and superiors... But that didn't mean he would trust on them again.

Ilakim was always quieter than other Razielims. He enjoyed feeding his curiosity and intellect, being part of the philosophers from the clan. If anyhow he took part in the intrigues lead by Kain and his lieutenants just for amusing, it would be only following orders, helping most of times to his mentor, one of the Elders, Alexandra. But when they weren't fighting against each other, Ilakim actually would maintain only few members from other clans as what could be similar to friends. Or, better said, other vampires which presence wouldn't be a nuisance to him. He even started, with the time and the boredom of the Empire, to get along quite well with a proud warrior of the clan Turelim.

Everything changed after the civil war, however. Now being merely a tool, like the rest of what remains of the clan Razielim, Ilakim turned suspicious, angry, grumpy and negative. Only his pride keeps him fighting, as well as his hatred towards humans. He doesn't trust anyone anymore, at least for a long time. Only his siblings are worthy of that. But, at the same time, he finds himself divided: He hates the humans for starting to steal their territory, yet as long as the war against them keeps going, the Razielim won't be the main target of the other clans. Plus it was still a good way to get blood without needing to rely in Turel and Dumah, even if just in fight.

Gengis:

[This information may be changed once Rahabims come out in game, depending of the lore information and if somehow goes against the story of my char in any way]

Gengis is a particular Rahabim, and a particular vampire in general. He was already blind as human, condition not cured by the dark gift. Why Rahab decided to create him even with that weakness, is a mystery that only few know. But let's begin from the start...

Even as human, and being born blind, Gengis wasn't a normal person. Orphan since a baby, being his father drained off of blood by their captors, and his mother dying after giving birth, after being hidden by other women of the blood-farm from their captors, it was usual to see the image of the young human wandering for the place years later, even then helping with the rest of the slaves, and so being enough useful to don't be killed. But already with the time, other humans noticed that he had some kind of inner, dark power. Even if weak, Gengis managed to develop the power of foreshadowing, being able to see in dreams shadows of future events. While that made the other humans more suspicious towards him, suspecting of the work of a demon, it was enough to wake up the curiosity of other vampires. And so, deciding to keep him and to give him the dark gift in the future, but not trusting at all on him either, they started with a closed vigilance around him.

But, even then, both humans and vampires would underestimate him. He was blind, after all, and was born in the blood-farm. Slave humans were more docile, so what should they be afraid about? The fact that he could guess the future shouldn't be enough to consider him a problem after all. However, when Gengis already was a teenager, and some slaves managed to escape, taking advantage of the attack of a group of watchers, the psychic human followed them.

Looking for the lost city of Meridian, hearing about that being the last hope of humanity, however Gengis was more interested in the stories about mysterious covens of witches along Nosgoth's territory, being suspicious of worshipping demons. By that time, Gengis' psychic powers grew up, as well as his intuition. He would have more and more dreams showing to him what to do. Of course, he still couldn't see it clearly, as well as his eyes remained blind, and so he only could get some ideas, intuitions. But, somehow, he knew that it was his destiny to seek the destiny of the witches and learn more about his own. And so, he ended disappearing as well, no one knowing where he went.

For years, Gengis travelled along Nosgoth, using his accurate senses, his powers and his cunning to avoid vampires, becoming a traveller as well as a scavenger. This is how, one day, guided by his dreams, he found a fountain. In that time, the prophets didn't find it yet, so the man was alone. The smell of blood filled his nose, and not knowing if for being thirsty, of because of a dark power surrounding the place, he suffered the urge to drink. But instead of doing that right there, he picked up some of the blood in his empty canteen, and went away from that place, making sure that, if anyone would find it someday, it wouldn't be because of him. And so, after moving away, at a prudent distance, and compelled by a dream he had, Gengis drank from the blood, practically falling in coma in that instant, and soon dying. But, of course, that wouldn't be the end of him.

A Rahabim who was patrolling the zone, unaware of the blood fountain hidden in the ruins, found the corpse. Soon he recognized that human as the psychic one they were guarding years ago, and managed to escape with other humans. Since already other leaders of the clans wanted to get him to convert him and take advantage of his mysterious powers, that vampire saw his chance to give an advantage to his lord. And so dragged the corpse to the clan's territory, offering it to his creator Rahab to do with him whatever he liked. Effectively, the lieutenant gave to him the dark gif, and so Gengis became a member of the clan, and as his powers were practically intact, one of his advisers and prophets.

But, even then, Gengis wasn't like his brothers and sisters, and not just because of his powers: Tainted with the blood from the font, his body is forever poisoned, no matter how many humans he dries off. And so, his body turned weaker and more fragile, his wounds healing slower than the average vampire, unable to stay a physical fight against a skilled human, and so forced to either hunt from the darkness, or by fooling his preys making them thing he's just a defenceless, blind traveller, covering so his body with a long cape and hood to also protect himself from the sun rays, and even then being forced to get out only at night, even after passing his fledgling years. The only evolution he managed to get by himself with the time, once Rahabims will overcome their weakness to water, is a sort of receptors in his skin, similar to the sharks ones, allowing him to detect his near surroundings through them.

One thing that never changed, even without remembering his past more than what his powers can show to him or what he was told by others, it's his character. Almost always with a soft smile on his lips, he uses a lot of sarcasm. Also likes a lot to tease other vampires, either from his own clan or others, sometimes even making them doubt about if he's telling to them the truth about any future event, or just fooling them. That's how he and Ilakim started to get along, the second amused by the actions of the first. That was before the events of the clan Razielim after Raziel's betrayal, of course, making the Sentinel suspect of him, as well as everybody, even when Gengis never changed his behaviour towards him, maybe just being more polite until the Razielim decides to trust on him again.

Wieland and Aaliyah

Both humans and siblings, being Wieland the older one. They were born and grew up in the dangerous lands of Dark Eden, becoming orphans at a young age when some fledglings managed to kill their parents. But they managed to survive, joining another groups of humans, and so they swore to revenge their progenitors, Wieland developing a special hatred towards the vampires. Both of them trained as first as watchers, but Aaliyah turned not to be a skilled with the bow as her older brother. And so, swearing that she would find more allies along Nosgoth, she abandoned Dark Eden, well armed and concious about how dangerous her journey would be. Even when Wieland tried to stop her, worrying about his little sister, she didn't listen to him. So the young man grew up even angrier, aggressive, learning and killing all the vampires he managed to take with him.

It was just question of time that Wieland would turn into a skilled Watcher, and when a group of them decided to explore the lands, taking advantage of the civil war between vampires, and try to find and rescue more humans, he didn't doubt any second in joining them. After all, he always held the hope of finding Aaliyah alive.

And so Wieland and Aaliyah would meet again, and that was when the Scouts and members of the Ironguard, being Wieland there, took Freeport. They found there the mysterious Alchemists, and the now grow up man found that one of the Red Sisters was his own sister as well. The encounter was a good moment of hope and joy, and now, united with more weapons, resources and allies, both siblings are more than willing to cast out the vampires from Nosgoth.

Both siblings are serious, not really talkative. However, while Aaliyah is quiet and has less problems showing her feelings and worries towards her teammates, Wieland is more visceral, grumpy and sarcastic. His hate towards vampires is really strong, and he desires nothing more than to kill as much as those monsters as possible.

Hector

Hector is nowadays a Dumahim, and so a Reaver. As well as Gengis, he would have some kind of a relationship of mutual tolerance with Ilakim, maybe even some camaraderie in the old times. However, after the apparition of the Sentinels, they became almost enemies, and would fight each other if it weren't because of the alliance the clans made to fight the humans. But knowing that the Dumahims were who the most participated in the destruction of the clan Razielim, Ilakim just can't stand the members of such clan, just helping in combat because is the only way to guarantee his own survivability.

Hector himself is a skilled assassin of the clan, fast and deadly. He prefers to be elusive so enemies don't know where the attack comes from... Until is too late. Apparently he was already an assassin as a human, who grew up in the territories of Dark Eden. But he didn't turn into a Scout. Being part of a still small cult that worshipped the vampires themselves, Hector was already an assassin, using daggers as weapons to kill those humans who were fool enough to try to get into the yet growing Empire's territory. His skills and efficiency were enough to guarantee that he would be given the dark gift and join one of the clans, rather than turn into another mere puppet ready to be sacrificed to feed his lords. And so, taking advantage of being one of the strong clans, the Dumahim took advantage over the Zephonim, getting Hector for themselves.

Even when the Dumahim Hector doesn't need his daggers anymore, he still knows how to sneak and attack his preys in the middle of the battle, when they're too distracted to know what is coming from behind.

Cronos

Being a member of the clan Turelim, Cronos honours his own name, being a strong, brutal warrior like the rest of his brothers and sisters. Even if, like the rest of the vampires, he can't remember his past as human, he knows why Turel decided to give to him the dark gift: Even in life, he would be a great and brutal warrior, slaying a lot of vampires before finding a glorious death in battle. Probably his human self would be angry about how his glorious past would fall in disgrace by being turn in the enemy he so much hated. But, of course, that's something that the Turelim doesn't care about anymore.

Loyal to his master (Turel) and his god (Kain), Cronos always tried to bring glory to the clan and to himself in the battle, either in the internal intrigues between clans, for the amusing of Kain, or against few humans who would still trying to fight them, in their senseless hope of recovering Nosgoth to humanity some day. Idiots. The Turelim would always try to fight and get rid of his own faults and weak points as he trained to be the best warrior... But, even then, he wasn't violent out of the battle. Actually calm, serious and silence, Cronos always would think before act or talk, and even then, he only would do the second one when he considered it necessary. That would make other vampires to be suspicious about him, never knowing exactly what kind of thoughts would pass through his mind in that moment.

But, maybe precisely because of this quiet behaviour of him, he managed to develop an interesting relationship with a member of the clan Razielim Ilakim. Being at first mutual tolerance, then a tranquil friendship, and finally growing in interest in each other, in a camaraderie that would make them being comfortable with their mutual presences. Once he noticed that he wanted to go further, however, the Turelim would look at it like a weakness, even when, in theory, they were allies. But, before he could think about what to do, Ilakim would disappear, who knows if for months or decades, to pupate and evolve. In fact, he seemed to be quite happy about that, revealing that such evolution, which already Raziel completed, would be a great advantage for the Razielim clan. Only after talking with him, Cronos noticed something that worried him: Did Raziel then evolve before their dark god Kain?

Soon enough he found the answer, once he was told about the betrayal of Raziel, and how Kain ordered his cast into the abyss, accused of betrayal. And then chaos followed. The dark god suddenly was gone, without any word of hint about his destiny or about what to do in his absence. And so were the lieutenants who took the resolution to finish the work, and to kill all the members of the Razielim clan, assuring Dumah that they were an abomination to the eyes of lord Kain. And, suddenly, Cronos found himself marking his hands with the blood of those who once were allies, surprised as well when they found some of the elders already developed wings as well. Wings... Probably that was what Ilakim was talking about.

For the time the civil war took place, Cronos slaughter many Razielims, side by side with his siblings and with the members of the Dumahim clan. Even when he didn't forgot Ilakim, he never hesitated in his duty, following orders as the killing machine he was. He even had the honour to lead a group of Turelims and Dumahims to hunt one of the elders: Alexandra, who Cronos recognised as the mentor of his own friend. She knew who he was as well, she developed her wings as well, and so, after some exchange of words, the angry warriors attacked her. Even when they could defeat, Alexandra still managed to give to them a hard fight, taking some of them with her before her fall. Cronos decapitated her with her own sword, taking it as a trophy and burning down her body to make sure there wasn't way to her to come back to life.

Once that seemed like all the clan Razielim were took down, and still without knowing anything about Ilakim, neither finding his corpse in the pile of burning ones, Cronos turned even more silent, lonely and serious. Even then, he never thought about betraying Turel, and so participated in the fight over the possessions of the Razielims, thought he always focused in finding those from his old friend, rescuing basically books and other objects which didn't seem of so much importance for the rest. Maybe because of that, he wasn't most of times the main target. Time passed, as humans became stronger, and it was just question of decades when another war stroke them.

Again, finding himself alone, and belonging only to the war and the battle, once more Cronos threw himself to the front lines, changing only his enemies, but with the same goal: Killing as much as possible, and take possession of the lands. But, as he thought that nothing could surprise him anymore... He heard then about Razielim survivors. How was that possible? It didn't take a lot to him to get more information, about what did they tell to Dumah, and what would be their destiny. And surprised himself as well when he found out that Ilakim was one of the survivors. What should be a meeting between friends turned out to be quite bitter when the now deformed Razielim stormed his anger against him, knowing already that all the vampires of the other clans, Cronos included, spilled the blood of his own brothers and sisters. They would still be allies in that war, sure, but only because the now decayed clan had no other choice if they wanted to survive.

And so an idea became stronger in the mind of Cronos, and now with his old friend and once potential lover alive, he secretly fixed a new goal on his mind: To win again the trust of Ilakim, and recover at least their past camaraderie and friendship. Because he already accepted that the Razielim was the only weakness he didn't mind to keep.

For now, I'm done with all of those, though I'll edit this post eventually to add more details and so. Now it's your turn! ;)

iberaider
12th Aug 2014, 17:57
Might as well move this here then :)

Since I'm not massively versed in the lore of LoK (having only played a few in the series) there may be blanks or creative liberties taken. I'm currently reading through a lot of the lore and plan on grabbing some of the older games to play through again.


http://i.imgur.com/3YZf55S.jpg
Original image from PeterPrime on DeviantArt. Edited by me. Check him out, his art is pretty awesome.
http://peterprime.deviantart.com/art/Elven-Archer-Female-406127452

Name: Touka (derived from Toku, Japanese for Far) Cendre (french for Ash)

Age: 26

Allegiances: Human Race, The Watchers of Dark Eden

Physical Description:
Touka stands 5 foot 7 inches with an athletic build. She has emerald green eyes and dark brown hair which she wears long, just reaching her waist. She has a slightly pale skin complexion.

Personality:
Born under the ever watchful eye of her Vampire overlords, Touka has never been a boisterous and kept to herself and her family for most of her childhood. Even as a child she had to bare witness to the cruelty and brutality displayed by Vampires and it was not uncommon to encounter death. This has left her secluded. Her time in Dark Eden has revealed her kindness and desire to protect those she loves. Despite this she harbors a deep anger and hatred for all Vampire kind and can be ruthless, cunning and brutal when she needs to be.

Short backstory:
Touka was born into captivity before the War for Nosgoth began. Her mother died during child birth and she was raised by her father and uncle during their time under the control of the Vampires. Not too long after she turned 7, her father, uncle and many other humans executed an escape plan to break free from their chains. The escape was bloody slaughter with many humans being killed on the spot if they resisted or corralled back to their cages, Touka, her uncle and half a dozen other humans managed to escape with their lives, her father was among those who did not and she does not know of his fate.

The escapees traveled north, toward the land known as Dark Eden, they had caught wind of a civilisation of humans there living in the mountains. When they reached Dark Eden their number was only four, some succumbing to their wounds during the journey. Touka was raised then by her uncle in Dark Eden. 19 years have passed since her arrival and the War of Nosgoth has begun. She now fights for The Watchers and seeks her father in the hope of being his savior or his avenger.

Weapons and Abilities:
Touka has trained under the tutelage of The Watchers. She mastered the bow and due to hunting in the mountains has learned stealth and tracking techniques. She also makes use of various gadgets such as throwing knives and signal flares, common tools of The Watchers of Dark Eden.

GonarTrvig
12th Aug 2014, 18:27
Oooh! She's awesome! And the image is superb! ^_^. I see you used the sheet format to post her. I shall do the same in the future with my post... Maybe... (I think I'm going to edit it so many times I'm going to break it xD).

Anyway I didn't get too much into when were Wieland and Aaliyah born basically because I want to have freedom to settle them in the time without get bitten in the process xD. But I think they would be more or less Touka's age (of course, being Aaliyah younger). They probably would even get along, I think, at least Touka and Aaliyah share that they worry about their teammates, and Wieland is the one restless against vampires, in that case being the avenger of his parents.

Nice job with her! :)

P.D.: I know I posted too fast, maybe, but is so people knows they can leave their opinions here as well :P

Marmite666
12th Aug 2014, 20:39
(As previously posted)
I have 3 Nosgothian/ LOK characters as of current:
Violet -
Once had a terribly dull back story/ fan fic about her. I decided to re-write her story.
She is a human girl who's family and village were destroyed by the vampires. She and the younger residents were captured and enslaved. Over time Vi learned that the only way to survive was to adapt herself to the vampire's way of life-kill or be killed.
Eventually she escaped but she has never been the same.
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Lothasa-
A watcher (Scout) in love with a Rahabim.
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She has pretty much the same story as Vi but she has a habit of being kidnapped by Sentinals and hiding in boxes. After being dropped a few too many times she is somewhat crazy.

Lastly, we have Dorian the Sentinal-
https://scontent-a-ams.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xpa1/t1.0-9/10474302_10202457058734058_4101659085434226993_n.jpg
He is a real pretty boy this one. He is also gay.
Yep, I am serious he is in a relationship with a Reaver named Alexander, or Alex for short (an OC of SylvaStreak). Lothasa has a habit of chasing him down for fun. This is largely suspected to be his reason for becoming gay.
:3

GenFeelGood
13th Aug 2014, 04:57
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Hannibal, raised a soldier for Clan Melchahim a century before Raziel's execution. From the beginning, he was taught that Melchiah and the rest of the lieutenants were the Kings of Nosgoth and that Kain is God. He was taught of the unity between the clans under Kain's rule as the one great truth; and Hannibal devoutly took these teaching to heart as his faith, until the time of the Razielim's purge.

For months his hands were stained with the blood of those that he saw as his brethren, at the command of those who taught him to see his victims as brethren in the first place; and Kain, the one he looked upon as God, was nowhere to be seen or heard. He now knew that this one great truth, his faith, that he was taught from the moment of his birth, was a lie.

Working along side the Dumahim in the vampire civil war that followed, he indiscriminately helped to slaughter countless numbers of Turelim and Zephonim as they fought to capture and keep areas of what was once the clan territory of the Razielim. He grew to enjoy slaughtering them as proof of his superiority, after being looked down upon by them during the Razielim's purge. Even now, with the human uprising well underway, Hannibal quietly makes his list of those to kill; and, when the opportunity exists, knocking a few of them off that list and claiming they died at the hands of human combatants.

Vampmaster
13th Aug 2014, 09:39
I like the wolf/bear mask on the female scout. That looks cool. Hannibal looks great too.

I'd be a bit wary of giving strong telekinesis to a vampire other than a Turelim. While the occasional mutation isn't out of the question lorewise, it could create some ambiguity between the different clan's traits. I think it would cause confusion.

GonarTrvig
13th Aug 2014, 10:28
Marmite, your ocs looks like fun, and I'd actually like to see them in action, even if just for some lols. They're cuties, though I dunno how would Ilakim feel about his brother since I dunno how his character/behaviour is xD.

Gen, I'm saying it again: I LOVE Hannibal *_*. And now, with the story, even more! Melchahim with faith issues and also being totally badass is so great!


I'd be a bit wary of giving strong telekinesis to a vampire other than a Turelim. While the occasional mutation isn't out of the question lorewise, it could create some ambiguity between the different clan's traits. I think it would cause confusion.

I... actually agree. When I was writing Gengis' story, it was with the idea in mind that I would need to change him even now and then. My idea wasn't to give to him strong telekinesis, but just enough to being able to defend himself and run for cover (though probably I didn't explain it well). His main power is actually the foreshadowing thing, something that he actually got since human (prophets would have them even before starting to drink the blood from the fountain, so I didn't find it so hard to put on him). However, I admit that I'm still quite confused about what to do, since my idea was to give to him some basic "weapon" to defend himself since human, and as vampire giving to him the weakness of the tainted blood to don't make him overpowered. However, probably even if that telekinesis is not a mutation thing, I may, effectively, get rid of it. With his foreshadowing powers plus his cunning should be enough to him to survive, even when he was a human. What do you think?

And thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it :). Even if I try to think about my characters and to don't put too much weird stuff, I admit that sometimes I need more opinions, being Gengis the perfect example... And actually wanting to put him precisely in case someone wanted to analyse him and give their opinion/feedback, as you just did. I guess with the rest, at least with the ones with enough information, everything is okay, since I didn't get out of the lore itself :P.

Sylvastreak
13th Aug 2014, 20:55
Backstory times :3

Liese, an alchemist of the Red Sisters, was born a simple village girl out of the eye of the clans. She harbours a deep grudge against the Prophets and their sects, but most of all she hates their blood magics and their demands of blood tithes from villages they protect... Such as her own. At a young age, she was offered up as a tribute to a band of Prophets. They took blood from near her spine, nearly paralyzing her and severing quite a few muscles that slowly, painfully healed. The blood magic they used to heal her made her barren, and while this enabled her to freely join the Alchemists, she still hates them for taking the choice away from her. She has a fascination with vampires that extends to their culture and biological makeup, and is sworn sisters with Lothasa. She ends up in a relationship with...

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Elias, a young Sentinel who was one of Lailah's group that lived in the deepest underground city of the Razielim. He was born albino as a human and was chosen by his sire for that attribute. He was a very pretty and popular specimen of Clan Razielim... Up until jealousy got the better of his clan mates when he devolved and they took out their frustrations on him, leaving him scarred, bitter and paranoid of his siblings. Elias is quiet, submissive and sneaky by nature, preferring to slit his opponents' throats with his wing tips rather than taking them on in open combat. He comes to adore Liese and follows her around like a puppy.

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Alexander, or Alex for short, in his human life (above) was a Scout from Dark Eden. He got a little too cocky around the Reavers one day and is now a Nightstalker of Dumah's clan. He's fast, silent and deadly in battle. Around Dorian, his friend-with-benefits, he's like an overgrown vampiric puppy wanting the Sentinel's attention.

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I don't even know where to START with Eirian. Oh yeah, she's adopted Violet.

RealLoK
13th Aug 2014, 21:08
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This is Sultana, the first LoK RPG character I ever created. I'm still working on her backstory, but thus far, she is a Rahabim who shares a strong bond with some members of the Melchiahim. Sultana appears to be a gentle and timid woman, but she can be quite selfish when it comes to impressing her master (who she is in love with). Knowing that her master appreciates art in all its forms, she tries to stand out as a singer and dancer among the other Rahabim. When her plans fail, she tends to get depressed.

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Scarlet is a Melchiahim and known for her brash and tomboyish attitude. She is Sultana's best friend and always tries her best to keep a smile upon her friend's face. Even though she sometimes laughs about Sultana's obsession with Rahab, incourages her to go on fighting for him.
Scarlet is a warrior who prefers small weapons that allow fast attacks.

Marmite666
13th Aug 2014, 22:30
Marmite, your ocs looks like fun, and I'd actually like to see them in action, even if just for some lols. They're cuties, though I dunno how would Ilakim feel about his brother since I dunno how his character/behaviour is xD.


Okay detailsssssss.......

Dorian was once a nobleman ruling over his own relatively vast crop of land. He believed himself to be beyond the vampire war but surprise surprise , he was wrong. 'Hell's Angels' (what Dorian called the sentinels) descended to bring forward their purpose. The vampires decimated the villagers living and working on the land. Either they became food, slaves or if they were really (un)lucky they would become a new recruit. In his terror Dorian could do naught but watch as the land below burned. As he sank to his knees and he buried his head in to his trembling hands an unwanted visitor crept closer...

He awoke to a whole different 'man' staring him in the mirror, unsure of how long he was out of action for.
https://scontent-a-lhr.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xfa1/t1.0-9/10593195_10202461995617477_2511037624284415218_n.jpg

As a sentinel Dorian cannot remember much but he does still 'rule' over his land. He prefers to keep himself locked up in among his books and the vampire archives (brought to him for safe keeping, also because no-one ever bothers with them any more).

Although as a human he liked women he was chased by the Watcher Lothasa so often it drove him away from the idea.
His casual lover Alexander the Reaver will come around often and act like a little puppy demanding attention until Dorian either loses his patience or gives him acknowledgement.
(It needs work I know ^^; )

GonarTrvig
13th Aug 2014, 23:12
Yeah, more ocs! I looove them so much! X3

Poor Razielims over here, seems like my baby is not the only "antisocial" one xD. Probably he would just ignore Eris until he has no other choice, or maybe he would consider him weak for his shyness and so... But wouldn't bother him, probably (but better if he doesn't discover that his lover is a human... oops!). Liese and Eirian are totally cuties (thought I'd love to know how an Ancient vampire survived in a time when Janos Audron, being apparently the last one, died owo). And Alexander... Dayum!

Sultana and Scarlet are totally cuties as well, and I sooo can imagine Gengis teasing the first one, as he would do with anyone else, of course! Things like "Do you think this dress would impress our lord?" "I think you look great!" "Thank you a lot, Ge...! Oh, shut up!" or so xD.

And now, Dorian... I like that "classic noble vampire" touch you gave to him, and about his relationship with his brother Ilakim... I think they wouldn't talk a lot, but both of them seem to like a lot to collect books and so... I can see them sharing books time to time when one needs something specific, of course in the exchange of favours or just a "Take it and leave me alone!" thing.

Btw... Am I the only one who can imagine a Reaver actually hissing? (probably I'll do that with Hector, maybe 'cuz I'm more of a cat person xD).

P.D.: I shall tomorrow or so edit my post with Gengis' story changed without the telekinesis thing, and put Cronos' story and maybe extend the humans ones. I'll see :P.

P.D.2: The more I see ocs, the more I want to RP with them and so ;_;.

Varulven
13th Aug 2014, 23:20
Btw... Am I the only one who can imagine a Reaver actually hissing? (probably I'll do that with Hector, maybe 'cuz I'm more of a cat person xD).



Nope, you're not the only person :D
I think the reaver is a bit catlike xDD

Marmite666
13th Aug 2014, 23:56
And Alexander... Dayum!

*Dorian hisses and flies off with Alex* MINE!

Yeah.... I'll type up the other's back stories soon. Just need to 100% decide on Vi's lol

GonarTrvig
14th Aug 2014, 00:05
Nope, you're not the only person :D
I think the reaver is a bit catlike xDD

Yeah, right? I see most people compares him with a wolf, probably because of the growl... But to me they're more like jaguars or something like that :D.

Also, the mental image of a Reaver growling, ready to catch their prey, and suddenly hissing when an Alchemist shuts bombs to the roof when the Reaver is... Is too amusing and priceless xD




*Dorian hisses and flies off with Alex* MINE!

Yeah.... I'll type up the other's back stories soon. Just need to 100% decide on Vi's lol

*Mod laughs so hard practically needs to be caught by Ilakim to don't fall on the floor*

Sorry, it took me by surprise xDD (in a good way). I'd love to see them. I need to yet think in a story for Hector, but first would need to add Cronos' one. Btw, Ilakim... Do you hiss too?

Ilakim: .......... Of course not! What kind of question is that!?

Aww, it would be cute. Or fun, I can't decide xD. I guess Hector will be the hissing cat-like one, then :D

Hector: ... May I kill her?

Ilakim: Not serving as precedent... I'll help you.

RealLoK
14th Aug 2014, 11:11
Sultana and Scarlet are totally cuties as well, and I sooo can imagine Gengis teasing the first one, as he would do with anyone else, of course! Things like "Do you think this dress would impress our lord?" "I think you look great!" "Thank you a lot, Ge...! Oh, shut up!" or so xD.

Thanks^^ I have a lot of LoK OCs, but Sultana and Scarlet are my favourites. Their friendship is a little problematic, since their sires aren't too thrilled about it. But as long as they don't share any of their clan's secrets, Melchiah and Rahab tolerate it. It's also one of the conflicts Sultana has to put up with. At some point, she will have to decide whether she remains loyal to her master or to Scarlet.

Marmite666
14th Aug 2014, 12:03
Do you hiss too?

Well I say hiss, it would more likely be a bat like screetch.
Although Dorian plays the nobleman but he has a hell of a temper sometimes (Usually if someone has done something to annoy him, usually Alex taking things too far- as was the case in my RP with SylvaStreak last night)
https://scontent-a-lhr.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xaf1/v/t1.0-9/10606566_10202497041173594_9222048938986770973_n.jpg?oh=7b882bf258f0d4b123276090fb045ed9&oe=5480482B
(I picture this as being the laughing slightly with the grip slowly tightening around his glass-i knowwww he should have claws and yes his eyes go red when he's in rage/ bloodthirsty mode >.>)

GonarTrvig
14th Aug 2014, 13:13
Thanks^^ I have a lot of LoK OCs, but Sultana and Scarlet are my favourites. Their friendship is a little problematic, since their sires aren't too thrilled about it. But as long as they don't share any of their clan's secrets, Melchiah and Rahab tolerate it. It's also one of the conflicts Sultana has to put up with. At some point, she will have to decide whether she remains loyal to her master or to Scarlet.

Hmm... That sounds interesting, yeah. I guess the problem wouldn't be that big if Sultana were a Zephonim (the weakers against the strong ones!), but as I saw in the lore, Rahab seems to be the most neutral about conflicts and all, being exactly in the middle. I dunno, Sultana and Scarlet seem to act quite human, but for whatever reason is something that actually I like ;). I want to think that, being so many vampires, some of them maybe retain more of their past humanity than others, even if that maybe would be problematic if the lords and masters consider someone being "too weak" because of that.



Well I say hiss, it would more likely be a bat like screetch.
Although Dorian plays the nobleman but he has a hell of a temper sometimes (Usually if someone has done something to annoy him, usually Alex taking things too far- as was the case in my RP with SylvaStreak last night)

(I picture this as being the laughing slightly with the grip slowly tightening around his glass-i knowwww he should have claws and yes his eyes go red when he's in rage/ bloodthirsty mode >.>)

Yeah, I know ;). That screech when they make Take Off, which I find sooo cute and fun xD

Hahaha! The more I read about Dorian, the more interesting I find him :P

P.D.: Btw, updated my first post about my ocs, if someone wants to take a look and so.

GenFeelGood
14th Aug 2014, 17:58
Wanted to show Hannibal's development.

As time goes on, in the war against the human uprising, Hannibal witnesses the effects of the decay that plagues his clan first hand. He sees this rot, an affliction that the other clans usee to proclaim the inferiority of the Melchahim, physically weaken soldiers he knew to once be vastly stronger than him; and he watched as these soldiers fell in combat because they refused to face their impairment, an impairment he felt developing in him as well. Wanting to continue fighting on at least the same level, Hannibal looked to the blood sciences that his clan developed, turning from a warrior to a blood conjurer.

https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-2GHXwIjs-tw/U-zcteJi_CI/AAAAAAAAAjY/WMfCv1Als8o/s400-no/fantasy_avatar2.jpghttps://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-y9kGf5d-wJY/U-zzZufRTHI/AAAAAAAAAkU/NWKIm94PH6o/w395-h399-no/split.png

lucinvampire
14th Aug 2014, 19:38
Ok I can't draw so sorry for these not being proper artwork...but I thought I'd share anyway...

http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff411/lucinvampire/General%20junk/terrythetyrant-1.png

Terry the Tyrant

I am Tyrant hear me roar! I like throw humans with my big powerful hands and make chaos and noise to distract them – while the puny clans step in. Turelim great – the other clans weak with their small size and tiny arms – they cannot smash like me! I am Tyrant –Tyrants rule! No one can stop me when I’m on a roll – but what they don’t know – I want to give hug – and that what I’m doing when I run at them in excitement – but humans shoot me – and it hurts – sometimes I get carried away and charge and hit them down – and smash – oops sorry – but then they shoot me more! This makes me angry and I smash them down and roar!


http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff411/lucinvampire/General%20junk/davethedeceiver.png

Dave the Deceiver

My name is Dave and I’m a Zephonim…I like riding on trains but for some reason no one ever wants to sit with me - I don’t have many friends. The other clans and the humans are all scared of me – see we like to ritually cut and mutilate ourselves to advance our abilities but the way we look kinda freaks everyone out. I think we look pretty cool – even though sometimes it’s not easy not having any lips. The humans…well…they kind of try to stay well clear – more so than the other clans – they’re like eww Deceiver’s have the plague and they're all dirty – kind of gets a bit like a school playground sometimes with the pointing and the freaking out. I like to get all the humans hot under the collar by giving them some of the Deceiver fever – it gets them all in a bother and they don’t know where to put themselves. It’s a lonely life sometimes being a Deceiver – but you know – we’ve got to make the best of what we've got – and if we’re not happy we can always do some body modifications to improve it!

------

...I'll share my other ones in time...

GenFeelGood
14th Aug 2014, 19:54
Ok I can't draw so sorry for these not being proper artwork...but I thought I'd share anyway...


No need for sorry, I am using an avatar creator, we all are.
This is mine http://www.ageofgames.net/en/fantasyavatar/fantasy-avatar.html

I like Dave

GonarTrvig
14th Aug 2014, 19:58
Oooh, nice evolution in Hannibal *_*. A survivor at all cost. I'm even more curious now to see the Mechiham in game to see their abilities (though I'm dying to see Rahabims as well, daaamn!)... Did I say already that I love Hannibal? :P

Lucinvampire, I'm laughing so hard! xDDD. Your Tyrant is adorable! Poor thing only wants to hug but humans are soooo mean! ... When it was the war against the Razielim, did he try to hug them as well? :P The Deceiver is awesome too (damn dat cosplay *_* ) :D

Marmite666
14th Aug 2014, 22:38
https://scontent-a-lhr.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xaf1/t1.0-9/10494683_765928636763334_4963451468827460835_n.jpg
I speak with the voices of the many and I can tell you, my name is Pinkamena the Prophet! :P

(not actually an OC...welll maybe i dunno yet xD)

Sylvastreak
14th Aug 2014, 22:45
(thought I'd love to know how an Ancient vampire survived in a time when Janos Audron, being apparently the last one, died owo).

All I can really say is shenanigans of the dimensional variety...

Marmite666
14th Aug 2014, 22:54
All I can really say is shenanigans of the dimensional variety...

And that Violet is not stable in the chronoplast stream.... >.>
https://scontent-b-lhr.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xap1/t1.0-9/10561755_10202462043538675_6923734147879580899_n.jpg

GonarTrvig
14th Aug 2014, 23:23
You had my curiosity...

... but now you have my attention :D.

Marmite666
15th Aug 2014, 13:44
You had my curiosity...

... but now you have my attention :D.
Okay the best and easiest way to describe Vi is that she's a bit of an enigma. . . She is a collective of souls, a conduit of sorts. Having lived many lives that she cannot remember. Her current incarnation (Violet) was killed by Dumah for causing trouble and stirring up the human cattle. Then she woke up and was captured by the razelim who shoved her in a cell. She cannot die for some reason.


I shall detail that more later.
Its still very much a WIP :p

GonarTrvig
16th Aug 2014, 09:34
Okay the best and easiest way to describe Vi is that she's a bit of an enigma. . . She is a collective of souls, a conduit of sorts. Having lived many lives that she cannot remember. Her current incarnation (Violet) was killed by Dumah for causing trouble and stirring up the human cattle. Then she woke up and was captured by the razelim who shoved her in a cell. She cannot die for some reason.


I shall detail that more later.
Its still very much a WIP :p

And somehow Eirian is a past life of Violet or so? :scratch:

Sounds really interesting! Perhaps a bit too dangerous to don't make it crash with the lore or confusing... But since this is not a RP forum and there are not rules about what can your OC do and don't... :P I take the lore more seriously with my ocs, or I try to, but I enjoy to read about other ocs :D.

Waiting for those details then :P *still needs to make Hector's story*

Marmite666
16th Aug 2014, 17:40
And somehow Eirian is a past life of Violet or so? :scratch:

Sounds really interesting! Perhaps a bit too dangerous to don't make it crash with the lore or confusing... But since this is not a RP forum and there are not rules about what can your OC do and don't... :P I take the lore more seriously with my ocs, or I try to, but I enjoy to read about other ocs :D.

Waiting for those details then :P *still needs to make Hector's story*

Well, I am trying to be as careful as possible this time. Originally Vi was a random girl who found the soul reaver, that kain had lost. It killed her, raz joined with her soul to keep himself and her alive blahblahblah *groan*. So I re-wrote her.

Nah Eirian is her own self. She's a dimensional guardian that takes risk not caring about the consequences. She somehow ends up creating a portal to present day Nosgoth and is of course captured for being strange. She meets Violet in the cells and kind of ends up adopting her. :p

Lots of work on stories to go xD

GenFeelGood
19th Aug 2014, 20:35
Working on a friend and foe for Hannibal, no back story yet.

https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-p8gOVE87jAk/U_OyeXPTrKI/AAAAAAAAAlw/l07AYZFH2-4/s400-no/reaver.jpg
Valina, a reaver for clan Dumahim and Hannibal's connection, and comrade, to the clan that started back with the alliance between their clans during the vampire civil war.

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-z2-UhBxtALQ/U_Ovhg1BhqI/AAAAAAAAAlI/lOQZMFQ4oMg/s400-no/deceiver.jpg
Jack, a deceiver of clan Zephonim. He is also called Jackal but only fools call him this to his face, the last thing they experience is finding out why first hand.

Doomykins
20th Aug 2014, 05:57
Oh, it's actually really interesting to see people doing OC's for this game. I was looking forward to actually writing one but I didn't think anyone else was. And I'm not a huge fan of being a sore thumb in that sense.

I'm hoping to get a Razielim and a Turelim OC done soon, I'll post it here once I get around to making them :P

(On a side note a great deal of these OC's are pretty nice too, I've enjoyed reading them.)

Sylvastreak
20th Aug 2014, 18:39
And somehow Eirian is a past life of Violet or so? :scratch:

If she was we'd all be doomed!! marmite has it slightly wrong in terms of Eirian's appearance in modern Nosgoth... As the guardian of dimension and all, Eirian is a little more than odd in terms of biology after she's been through so many different planes. She came across one of the blood fountains while it was in the state the Prophets found it in and, being extremely hungry and more than a little desperate at that point, she figured blood was blood and drank from it. She came to many centuries later in the modern timeline, her abilities having manifested themselves while she was unconscious to hide her in a less material realm from the humans' eyes and vampires' senses.
Apart from that, it's as marmite says :) She gets captured by the Razielim, thrown in a dungeon and adopts Violet ^^

lucinvampire
21st Aug 2014, 12:12
No need for sorry, I am using an avatar creator, we all are.
This is mine http://www.ageofgames.net/en/fantasyavatar/fantasy-avatar.html

I like Dave

Thankies for the info :D - when I get a few mins I'll be sure to give this a tinker...



Lucinvampire, I'm laughing so hard! xDDD. Your Tyrant is adorable! Poor thing only wants to hug but humans are soooo mean! ... When it was the war against the Razielim, did he try to hug them as well? :P The Deceiver is awesome too (damn dat cosplay *_* ) :D

Glad you liked him :D - yes the Razielim didn't like Tyrant hugs either - they flew away :'( Tyrants sad...

:D you like the cosplay and Dave!

...I'll post my other OCs when I get chance :D

RealLoK
21st Aug 2014, 20:35
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/233/2/7/lyze_by_ganonstadt-d7w3qhn.jpg

This is Lyze, a Turelim. While he tries to appear as a sophisticated prince charming, he really is rather clumsy and not very bright. When he is not "working" as a warrior for his clan, he spends his time stalking Sultana. He does not know much about women, so his efforts to impress Sultana (or any other woman) mostly end in really awkward situations. The only reason why his Lord, Turel, puts up with Lyze is that, while normally clumsy, he is quite an excellent warrior.
Furthermore, he is very loyal to Turel and the Turelim. Despite the cheerfulness and laid-back attitude he normally displays, Lyze takes his duty very seriously and won't hesitate to raise his sword against anyone posing a threat to Kain's empire.

GonarTrvig
22nd Aug 2014, 01:42
Oh, well, just telling that, even if I'm not posting lately, I'm still stalking this threat (I need a ninja icon). Also to warn that I added at last Hector's story :D (not something big at the end but well).

I'm expecting to see more about more OCs :). Maybe even if she's already dead by the time of Nosgoth, I'll do something about my Razielim Alexandra. She was my first OC after all. Or, at least, the first one I roleplayed with. She deserves something, my baby.

Oooh, prince tiny Turelim? Who uses sword instead of fists to fight? I'd love to see the reactions of other, big Turelims about that :D. I guess Lyze needed to fight really hard to be tolerated in the clan. Fortunately Cronos probably wouldn't give a damn as soon as he's efficient in battle xD.

As I said, wanting to read more about the rest *_*

RealLoK
22nd Aug 2014, 10:21
Oooh, prince tiny Turelim? Who uses sword instead of fists to fight? I'd love to see the reactions of other, big Turelims about that :D. I guess Lyze needed to fight really hard to be tolerated in the clan. Fortunately Cronos probably wouldn't give a damn as soon as he's efficient in battle xD.

Oh, he is a very efficient fighter. But as soon as Sultana is around, he starts acting all clumsy XD So sometimes, situations like this occur:
Lyze: *follows Sultana around while she is out hunting, but stumbles and falls right in front of her feet* *after a moment of awkward silence* Uh... I'm at your feet. I guess.
Sultana: Have you been following me again?!

Marmite666
9th Sep 2014, 13:44
Party Dorian
https://fbcdn-sphotos-f-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xpf1/v/t1.0-9/10423880_10202596655543891_5508494600755606244_n.jpg?oh=20bbd565be57c226c2ee16ebc06580e9&oe=549234CD&__gda__=1419868850_80a24dff5618eea74fdb3e33bb10d697
I got bored...Don't judge me >.>

SpectralWraith
9th Sep 2014, 22:12
Eh i tried to upload this some time ago, but i didn't know how, now i find a way (and btw the comic is like a bit cutted cause i didn't know how to scan A3)

Story
The comic was supposed to take time after raziel killed killed melchiah, it was a group of 25 specialist vampire hunters who took the mission of killing the youngest brother Melchiah, it was supposed that during the comic a lot of 'em die in a brutal way just letting 5 vh(vampire hunters) to enter melchiah's resolved puzzle, and after a lot of fights they send Pedro (the latino :3) to see where was the way to melchiah's lair... After some time Pedro came back from his short journey bleeding and by a miracle alive. And said: "Melchiah is dead..."

Comic p1
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2014/252/f/4/comic_sr_by_renatowuzas-d7ylaec.jpg

*NOTE: I skiped a lot of parts of my little work there, and i'm srry it is just 1 page somehow i manage to lost almost all of them!
Sorry if i got bad grammar, i'm kinda bad at speaking english

GenFeelGood
10th Sep 2014, 17:40
https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-p8gOVE87jAk/U_OyeXPTrKI/AAAAAAAAAlw/l07AYZFH2-4/s400-no/reaver.jpg
Valina, after working alongside Hannibal in the civil war she is tasked with a covert operation that is designed so, once the uprising is over, the Dumahim take command of the Empire. She is tasked with eliminating strong, high ranking member of the other clans during open engagements with humans; and also claiming as many prime corpses as possible for clan Dumahim to use in restoring and increasing their ranks.

She sometimes includes Hannibal in the killing if he is after them as well, though he doesn't know her true motivation and simply assumes she has the same blood lust, as well as lingering grudge from the civil war.

GonarTrvig
10th Sep 2014, 21:12
Sooo, after a time without visiting the forum because of work, I managed to get so attached to the Deceiver class after starting playing with him (now that my Sentinel is level 25) that I created another oc... And managed to get him in the roleplaying forum where I am. So here he is:

Aatos

A Deceiver of the clan Zephonim. Concretely an infiltrator specialist. Even before the civil war, he was already a spy of the clan, helping to his master Zephon to manipulate and take part of the plots against other clans by getting and bringing to him valuable information. Also he was part of the Guinea Pigs used in the experiments to control their evolutions as their will. As a result, Aatos improved some of his skills. One of them was Disguise, which he would be able not only to maintain, but even to control his voice to change it, as soon as he doesn't force it. Of course, it's not perfect, and the illusion can be broken if he attacks or do "vampire stuff". But is still quite useful.

When the civil war began, he didn't hesitate in turning against the members of the Razielim clan (and later other clans when the fight for the lands), in fact helping in locate those who would hide and so letting to his allies do the dirty work most of the times. Or, if wasn't too risky to him, killing the victim or victims with his own claws. Of course, he didn't find the remains of the clan, being surprised as well once that, decades later, they appeared. It's something that hurt his pride as spy and infiltrator. So once his targets passed to be the humans in the war for Nosgoth, he kept doing his work as Deceiver, but soon noticed that they would need something more to bring the victory to the vampires. Something that, of course, should be used by Zephon himself. That's why, after years of fights, Aatos decided to travel along Nosgoth, searching that weapon, dark knowledge or whatever is necessary to win the war...

Aatos is not too much different from his brothers and sisters. He's manipulative, selfish, at the edge of madness. He tries to keep improving on his abilities, and also he's only loyal to his master and "father" Zephon. And he won't hesitate in manipulate with his tricks and words whoever is necessary to reach his goals... At any cost.

SpectralWraith
11th Sep 2014, 01:22
... **** yeah bro, nice description!

GonarTrvig
11th Sep 2014, 16:34
... **** yeah bro, nice description!

Is that supposed to be a sarcasm? Oh, well, excuse me if English is not my first language and so I can't use a so advanced Shakespeare-like words and so (specially since I didn't use it for weeks). Also, of course the original sheet of Aatos is quite more complete, but I just refuse to translate it entirely when here I don't need to explain more than the basic or how did he end in another world and universe on his search of information or something to help vampires to win the war (since in Nosgoth itself he would stay in Nosgoth to start with).

This is not supposed to be a serious threat when everything must be concise and detailed, but only a "hey look at my ocs" one. Of course, feedback is welcome, if is a good one and not just sarcasm or "Geez, your oc ****", and if the muse accepts them. I saw shorter descriptions and resumes (nothing to say against it) and didn't see anyone directly or indirectly complaining.

Sylvastreak
11th Sep 2014, 21:29
Pretty sure that's not sarcasm, just a creeped out emoticon? Decievers ARE pretty creepy... and the idea of one being that good at Disguise is terrifying!

SpectralWraith
12th Sep 2014, 07:34
not sarcasm man. it is just that you hooked me with your story (Aatos and Gengis, to be frank i really like 'em), I could not say anything more precise... **** Yeah!

besides i'm not a native english speaker either, my english is sometimes quite bad. It's hard to transalte Spanish expressions to English, sometimes they sound offensive don't take me wrong please , you know in my country sometimes we praise with insults.

*I had a previous experience in other forum, when people started talking about a possible sarafan class, and unfornately a moderator took me in the wrong way (i got to improve my english:rolleyes:)

Saludos Hermano

GonarTrvig
12th Sep 2014, 20:37
Pretty sure that's not sarcasm, just a creeped out emoticon? Decievers ARE pretty creepy... and the idea of one being that good at Disguise is terrifying!


not sarcasm man. it is just that you hooked me with your story (Aatos and Gengis, to be frank i really like 'em), I could not say anything more precise... **** Yeah!

besides i'm not a native english speaker either, my english is sometimes quite bad. It's hard to transalte Spanish expressions to English, sometimes they sound offensive don't take me wrong please , you know in my country sometimes we praise with insults.

*I had a previous experience in other forum, when people started talking about a possible sarafan class, and unfornately a moderator took me in the wrong way (i got to improve my english)

Saludos Hermano

... My apologies, then ^^U. I got used to think that "..." + sentence is usually a sarcastic one, and written words don't let you feel the intonation and stuff, so that plus not being used to have my ocs so praised made me take it all in the wrong way, and I apologize for that ^^u.

Said that, I'm really glad you both like Aatos so much! He's my last oc in general, and Nosgoth in particular, so I'm really hyper with him. And I'm glad you saw my other chars as well! (Gengis is one of my prides and also my oldest oc of the ones I presented here, even if he wasn't born as a LoK oc).

And yeeah, I'm Spanish too, so I know how we're more free with insults and cuss here xD (in fact, sometimes it's hard to me to write here without cussing xD). It just that, as I said before, sometimes it's hard to get the tone, specially in international places where there are people from around the world.

So, well, thanks!

P.D.: Spectral, since you're Spanish too, I can pass to you by PM the link of Aatos' original sheet, if you want to take a look ;) (and to the forum in general as well if you want).

SpectralWraith
13th Sep 2014, 00:09
Oooh si... i've already sent ya the PM

RealLoK
19th Sep 2014, 11:30
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/262/a/b/minuett_by_ganonstadt-d7zpr1m.png

Minuett, another Rahabim^^
Minuett is a very silent woman who spends a lot of time with meditation and training. She is fiercely devoted to the Clan and won't tolerate any distractions when it comes to fulfilling her duty. Some of her siblings call her a "mindless drone" while others admire her dedication.

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This is Aventus, my Razielim.
Aventus is an artist who takes great pride in his abilities. Mostly seen with a paintbrush in his hand, he is always searching for new inspiration, something that, as he puts it, "sets his heart on fire".

lucinvampire
19th Sep 2014, 12:26
Minuett, another Rahabim^^

This is Aventus, my Razielim.

Very nice indeed :D I'd like to know more about them.

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I'm going to finish posting my vampire ones. I'll leave it a few days before posting the humans so this isn't a massive wall of text...


Tori the Turelim

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What to say *ponders* well I’m one of the ladies of the Turelim…not many of us about and it can be a tough gig sometimes…all the men are like meh girl what can she do – but I’ll tell you something all those years of hair pulling as a human set me up for the great skill of ear pulling the other Turelim…you know those things are great to keep the others under control…and who doesn’t want like 25 ear piercings in each ear right???
Well I might only been a youngen – some would call me an adolescent as you know I’ve only just started to evolve…but whatever we all have to start somewhere…but hey at least I’m not the “baby” anymore – all the others with their hair rubbing and messing up my do kinda got on my nerves…heh – but Terry’s been a jewel – he’s been like a big brother keeping all those brutes at arms length – once they’ve had a few drinks those Tyrants can become a little boisterous!...and of course he’s taught me the greatness of hugging – everyone needs a Turelim hug right!? But yeah I haven’t quite mastered that one either…anyway – that’s about all I gotta say right now…so see ya!


Ray the Reaver

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*Shines armour* Hey I’m Ray and I’m from the all powerful and super Dumahim…we’re the best clan out of the bunch. We look sharper than the others with our good looks and superior armour as we have awesome crafting skills. If you look at the other vampire clans you can tell we’re so much better than them – take those Zephonim talk about sick factor, they really should crawl back in the earth…oh wait no that’s the job of those, if you can even call them vampires – Melchahim…and look at the others talk about fish for brains Rahabim! Anyway you get the picture the other clans are mere second class citizens compared to us and our superior combat skills, stylishness and not forgetting other endowments *growl and waves claws*. The others might snicker under their breath at our war paint but we know we look so great meh to them and their flailing about on the battlefield skills, when they are as good as us then they can cast judgement and have a say in the true tactics for the war for Nosgoth…until then learn to fight muppets!


Sammy the Sentinel

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Hello one and all – my name is Samuel and I am from the Clan Razielim, the most prestigious and righteous clan of all of Lord Kain’s descendants. Our father, Lord Raziel, inherited all the best traits and not forgetting looks from our vampiric overlord. It is with great sadness we mourn our Lord, it was ghastly what happened. He could not help evolving, our father was created first so received the greatest of Kain’s gifts, so of course he would evolve first. Of course we will always respect our Lord Kain but we as a people will forever mourn the loss of our father – we are deeply sensitive after all.
As I have previously mentioned we are the most prestigious of the clans, we are superior in every way; we have the good looks, the intelligence and all the skills that the other clans could only dream of. Well what more to say? We are clearly the master clan of our race, all the others pale in comparison. Yes we might have had a little blip along the way where we got starved of blood and become a little less dignified in appearance than we should have been but that was not our fault, as soon as we got the substance required our gracious and angelic looks were restored. Sadly we are currently at the heel of those monstrous Dumahim but times change as we have seen and soon our rightful place will be reclaimed and we shall once again stand as the superior clan.

GonarTrvig
19th Sep 2014, 17:42
Oooh, more lovely ocs! I love them! *_*. Minuett is quite a cute name, and I can imagine Aventus with rests of paint in clothes and/or face even in fight, mixing with the blood stains :3.

And I love seeing more of your ocs around here, lucinvampire! The way you make them talk always amuse me and gives me some laughs xD, specially Ray though probably at least Ilakim and Aatos wouldn't like him... And Gengis would so tease him! (probably being so vain Ray would forget a lot that Gengis is blind when he "compliments" him, right? xD).

Well, I was about to edit my first post about a bit more of information about my Dumahim Hector... But then I thought that I needed to add something about his relationship (sort of) with Aatos, and that would mean edit two posts... So I thought that I'll better take advantage of this post for that :D.

More about Hector and Aatos:

Hector's clothes are more customized, even if the style still resembles to the usual in the clan Dumahim: He doesn't use armour, but light and comfortable clothes to help his movements, in detriment of physical protection... But he's more of trying to don't be hit in first place. Also, they have as an addition a hood, which always covers his head, letting visible only his face, neck and part of his chest. But, even if may look as the contrary, Hector is actually really vain, and he uses that in part because he likes the physical appearance it gives to him, in part to stand over the rest of his brothers by being easily recognizable... Something that may looks like a disadvantage in battle, right? But actually, since is not usual to see a vampire with hood, sometimes, in the middle of the battle, Hector can be mistaken with a human Scout, so sometimes only brings confusion between his enemies. It wouldn't be the first time that a human shots by accident one of his own allies because of that.

Both in and out of the battle, Hector is actually manipulative. He likes to exploit the weakness in the minds of humans... and vampires too. Even out of battle, he usually tries to see how to take advantage of everybody, without showing at all his own thoughts or commits. That makes him someone no one would trust in, someone who would act more like a Zephonim than like a Dumahim, even. Actually, as human, when it was decided that Hector should receive the dark gif, his lord would be Zephon, seeing a good assert on him. However, taking advantage of his higher rank, Dumah was the one who got him as a new member of his clan. Of course, that wasn't a popular decision towards the Zephonim, and being totally loyal to his lord, Aatos is still quite sore as well about it.

That's probably the reason why Hector and Aatos are seeing often together out of the battle. Even if they may look as good allies, or even friends, in the eyes of other members of the clans... Actually is quite the opposite: It's a mutual game of seeing who can discover the flaws of the other one, who can take more advantage of the other for manipulation and to reach their own goals. Both are enemies who camouflage their real intentions behind embroider words and subtle sarcasms or insults. Aatos tries to get Hector to be loyal to Zephon, as he were supposed to be, while Hector mocks at him, owning his loyalty to Dumah, and preferring the proud and strong clan of warriors before the sneaking and "weak", potential traitors. One thing is true... And is that the Empire should be thankful that Aatos and Hector are too divided to collaborate... Because, if they worked together, who knows what would they be able to achieve.

RealLoK
19th Sep 2014, 19:24
Very nice indeed :D I'd like to know more about them.

Alright, then^^

Minuett was a merchant's daughter in her human life. Even as a child, she was not a very social person and preferred to wander the fields around her hometome alone. Growing up, she became even more withdrawn and stern.
Shortly after her twentieth birthday, the son of one of her father's wealthy business partners proposed to Minuett, but she refused, not willing to marry anyone.
Feeling humiliated by her, the man ambushed her during one of her afternoon walks and choked her to death. A few hours later, after the sun had set, Minuett's body was found by an older Rahabim, who brought her to the Rahabim fortress for Rahab to decide if she was fit to be part of the clan.
Minuett remembers her past, but she prefers not to.


Aventus, on the other hand, was a nobleman's son, who had been taught about fine arts from an early age. Over time, he developed a rather extreme obsession with beauty, until some of his father's servants started to think that their "young master" had gone insane.
When Aventus was twenty-four years old, one of the maids working at the family estate fell down the stairs and broke her neck, and after hearing about it, Aventus asked his father if he was allowed to paint her like this, explaining it with the words:"This is true beauty, the peaceful expression that only comes with an ended life, the tranquility, the poetry of death! I must capture this in a painting! Let me paint her at her funeral, father!"
Rumours started to spread, that maybe the death of the maid had been no accident. People started to quiver in fear whenever Aventus' gaze met theirs, fearing that they might be his next "inspiration".
Oblivious to this, Aventus spent a lot of time in the gardens of his home, painting flowers and trees. A habit which was his doom when one of the manservants approached him and stabbed him in the back until he died. The servant then dragged the body into a nearby forest, hoping it would be eaten by wild animals. But instead, Aventus' body was found by Raziel.
Nobody ever asked any questions about the disappearance of the young nobleman, not even said nobleman's father. Everyone just wanted to forget about the "lunatic". So nobody expected to see him return, alive, hungry for their blood and lusting for revenge.
Until this very day, Aventus has the habit of not sucking his prey dry, but keeping some blood to use in his paintings.

GonarTrvig
19th Sep 2014, 20:03
Oooh! Now that I read more information about Minuett and Aventus, I like them even more! They're awesome! *_*

I'll talk about my first oc I used in a RP forum, back when I started in a LoK one. Already mentioned her in stories of Ilakim and Cronos, but she needs her own time, I think. She's my first, and even if I made a lot of mistakes in my past, I still have a special care for her. Sure, I didn't RP with her anymore once that forum died... But I adapted her in others by creating another one based on her look. And so... I decided to mix both in the same creature and make her new, I hope improved version. So, as I promised time ago, here she is ^^:

Alexandra:

She was not only a Razielim, but one of the Elder ones as well. A loyal warrior who would always serve to his lord Raziel, even risking her no-life by saving the pupating youngers when her master was cast to the abyss. Not only she helped to carry them to the secret vault, but also tried to attract the attention of her enemies far away from there to make sure the last hope of the clan's survivability wouldn't be found ever, even taking down some Turelim and Dumahim warriors before dying at the hands of the leader of the group, Cronos.

Even in life, Alexandra was a strong and beautiful woman. In fact, she was part of the nobility, smart, sly and competent. As well as ambitious. Even since child, she was trained not only to be a good maiden, but also to be a good warrior, training hard in fencing, and so turning in a really competent and reliable sword-fighter. With her black and silky hair, as well as her emerald eyes, soon she turned into a beautiful woman, able to use her appearance as a weapon to manipulate others, in combination of her intelligence.

As an ambitious woman, Alexandra wanted power. Since the time of the second apparition of the Saraphan order, nobles lost their power and prestige, and so taking advantage of being born after that time, the woman wanted to recover that influence. But even being smart and intelligent, Alexandra had a weakness that would be too expensive to her: She was arrogant, and too self-confident. It was so, that when the new vampires of Kain started to take Nosgoth lands, she was sure that her abilities as a sword-fighter were so great that she would be able to defeat all her enemies in a fencing fight. Even vampires ones.

And so she saw her chance when Raziel himself showed up in her territories to invade them. Alexandra challenged him, really sure of herself, and the lieutenant found her behaviour amusing, even if too arrogant, so he decided to accept her challenge and give to her personally a lesson. Turned out to the surprised vampire than she was really good to be a human, and even if he didn't hesitate in killing her... He found yet a new recruit to his growing army. That's how Alexandra passed from an independent noble woman to one of Raziel's most loyal warrior.

As a vampire, she was, as mentioned, loyal to Raziel. To the point that, even if, with time, she developed a strong crush towards him, she always put her own duties over her own feelings, keeping them hidden, and never telling about them to anyone. She wasn't worthy, after all... And she knew her master wouldn't ever give to her that kind of attention. That only made her even more committed to her own clan, being even over-protective towards her brothers and sisters. It was only time that she would train those youngsters who would survive to the humans of Dark Eden, teaching them to use their vampire weapons... And to use the sword as well, being a true believer that even a vampire needed to know to don't rely only and solely on their claws. One of her favourite ones was Ilakim, who ended being practically like a son under her eyes, even if sometimes the other Razielim was too visceral for his own good.

Even then, Alexandra never lost her ambition, and it was just question of time that she would become one of the Elders of the clan, not only for her age, but also for her competence. And, when the fall of Raziel took place, and the other clans started to attack them, she already developed her wings as well. In a movement of desperation mixed with arrogance, and to keep save her "little brothers and sisters" who were locked in the secret vault, she attracted on purpose a group of warriors of Turelim and Dumahim, leaded by Cronos, to her position in her own house. There, after mocking at them and a show of her arrogance and pride, made them focus in her, and even if the defeat was inevitable, she managed to take some of them down before with her trustworthy sword. Sword that Cronos himself would use to decapitate her, and so make sure the Elder wouldn't be able to come back to life.

lucinvampire
20th Sep 2014, 12:54
Alright, then^^




More about Hector and Aatos:




Alexandra:


Awesome write-ups really made me visualise the stories and their situations! :D These are all really cool OCs! Love em <3

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I'll leave you with a little Tyrant hugging...

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GonarTrvig
20th Sep 2014, 18:08
Glad you liked them, lucinvampire! :D


.... Aw-aw-AWWWW! Omg, your tyrants are just so cute I'll need to punch a wall to feel manly again! (?).

Can I adopt Terry? Pleaaaaase¿ X3

Varulven
20th Sep 2014, 18:10
Awesome write-ups really made me visualise the stories and their situations! :D These are all really cool OCs! Love em <3

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I'll leave you with a little Tyrant hugging...

http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff411/lucinvampire/General%20junk/Photo2014-08-2300_06_33.gif

D'aaawwwwww <3 <3 <3
I want a sweet reaver hug >333

Marmite666
21st Sep 2014, 17:47
Awesome write-ups really made me visualise the stories and their situations! :D These are all really cool OCs! Love em <3

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I'll leave you with a little Tyrant hugging...

http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff411/lucinvampire/General%20junk/Photo2014-08-2300_06_33.gif
awwwwww :D <3

Anyway, Here's another shot of Lotti. I commissioned this guy I met on TF2 and for £10 he produced this awesome pic:
https://scontent-a-lhr.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xap1/v/t1.0-9/10426546_10202726407667613_8529247619129058780_n.jpg?oh=97f13396ae90c288ff5aaaa140c3b346&oe=54CC2B97

You can find out more about commissions from him here: http://www.alextrinidadart.com/ :)

GonarTrvig
21st Sep 2014, 18:13
D'aaawwwwww <3 <3 <3
I want a sweet reaver hug >333

Hector: *approaches from behind on feet and hands, and jumps from behind to make his victim fall on the ground*

*Mun rubs the bridge of the noise* Not sure if you don't know what "sweet hug" means, or if you're being mean on purpose...

Sweet image of Lotti! <3 Archers are sooo cool to draw and so. I would share the commission I asked to another artist of Hector, but... Already edited my last post in the art threat do to so :D

*still wants to adopt Terry*

lucinvampire
22nd Sep 2014, 14:50
Thanks guys :D

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Onto the humans...

Amy the Alchemist
Those vampires are scum! Plague of our world! I can’t wait to get into battle and burn them all to cinders! There’s nothing greater than the smell of a burning undead corpse at the end of a flame thrower! Either that or throwing down some poison goo – ha suckers eat that! And if I’m going down I’m gonna take as many of those blood sucking scumbags with me!
I’ll go out of my way to help my comrades in battle, even if it could mean my death, as it’s always a good thing to give some of our healing love to rejuvenate our fellow vampire-hunters so we can continue on the fight. But with alchemy comes its risks, its an intricate task making potions and poisons and I’ve lost several sisters but it’s worth the risk to be able to kill as many of those vermin as possible! Those vampires – ugh I despise them with a passion, the pests yuk *shudders* especially those pesty Reavers always trying to get on top of us to claw our faces off, come on we don’t want your stinking undead-freaky-ass-living-corpse things on us! Burn vampire scum!

Pam the Prophet
There is much power in the blood, it flows through all our veins – those monstrosities don’t know what’s hit them when our coven come to ground and use what they have against them…magic is all powerful and it’s not only the dark forces that linger in the shadows that can be invoked by the shadow breeders! Blood is the life of all things and its power can be utilised for light as well as dark, its magic flows and in magic there is strength.
We are sometimes misunderstood by the villagers and humans we protect, our looks and magic scare some, and our need for what they hold dear sometimes frightens them further but our order must continue and so must the power it has raised. We have become the way we are to protect you, our fellow humans, lend us your blood, lend us your strength and we can destroy the dark forces!
In blood there is strength, in blood there is honour, in blood there is truth, and in truth there is sisterhood!

Harry the Hunter
After escaping the clutches of the evil Dumahim from one of their blood farms the Hunters recruited me into their order, trained hard and fast to be able to fight the leeches. The way of crossbrows, whips, bolas and grenades are our way, take ‘em down and as many as we can. I hate ‘em vampires with a passion, there’s nothing greater than tying ‘em up with a bola or whipping them in the face – even better if you can get others to join in the fun! I’m hardcore and don’t care if I get killed but I’m gonna save as many people from ‘em as I possibly can on the way and send as many of those undead freaks to their graves as possible! Those monsters killed my wife and children – they were dragged away from me as the scourges held me back as I fought with all my might against them, now with all the anger within me I’m gonna unleash my vengeance on those demonic spawn as possible! Is there anything more I need to say? But stand and fight and kill those bloodsuckers!

Scot the Scout
I come from the north, a small refuge hidden deep in the mountains and my duty is to protect my people from the vampire cretins that wish to pick us off one by one and enslave us all. I’ll always do what needs to be done to protect our village and the humans of the south, we’ve got to save this world, we’ve got to take it back from the vampires. They’re destroying us one village at a time and enslaving us to be nothing more than blood bags. We need to fight back, we need to save as many people as possible and undo all the wretched things they’ve done to us and our world – we’ve got to be strong!
There is nothing more satisfying than being a Scout, the steady hand and eagle eye of an archer, sniping a vampire from the sky. Sentinels and Tyrants in the air fear my bow – as your fall is a long way down and you’ll become vampire street pizza if you cross my line of sight! Timing is the key to the way of the Scout, patience is everything and as long as we fight together we can take back what is ours, the world and our hope!

Marmite666
29th Sep 2014, 11:09
Here, have a Lothasa. :3

RealLoK
29th Sep 2014, 15:48
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/272/e/f/raik_und_topaz_by_ganonstadt-d80yyrw.png

This are Raik (24 years old) and his younger sister Topaz (18 years old).
Unlike most of my other characters, Raik's and Topaz's story doesn't take place during the rule of Kain's empire, but rather a few years prior to the events of Blood Omen 2. Despite being born as the children of a well-known nobleman in Meridian, their childhood was not a pretty one. Their partents were rather neglectful, until they realized that Raik and Topaz could be used for politics, as some people were way more comfortable talking to Raik, rather than to his father.
Raik's mantra is:,,There are only three things worth loving for me: The moon, music, and my little sister." And true to that, he shared a very strong bond with Topaz, so they spent every minute they could spare together.
When Raik was 23 years old, he got into a fight with another nobleman, who had joked about raping Topaz. In his rage, Raik killed the other man. Only barely escaping execution, he was thrown out by his parents and was forced to live in the slums from then on, only surviving thanks to his trusty lute, which he took with him when he was chased away. Just a few months later, he received word about his sister getting married to the brother of the very man Raik had killed to protect her, as a compensation.
So, Raik returns to Upper City to save his sister. He breaks into the mansion of Topaz's husband, only to find his sister covered in bruises.
Despite his urge to punish his sister's tormentor, Raik escapes with Topaz. After that, they went travelling across Nosgoth, hoping to find a new place to call home.

lucinvampire
30th Sep 2014, 11:42
Tori is offering Turelim hugs...any takers? >

http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff411/lucinvampire/Cosplay/HUGZ.jpg

Varulven
30th Sep 2014, 15:46
Tori is offering Turelim hugs...any takers? >

http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff411/lucinvampire/Cosplay/HUGZ.jpg

Me: Hugs Tori.... *snap!* That was my spine O___ó

Great Cosplay, Lucy :D

GonarTrvig
30th Sep 2014, 16:22
Tori is offering Turelim hugs...any takers? >

http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff411/lucinvampire/Cosplay/HUGZ.jpg

*being already so tiny, she only needs to climb Tori's back, sit on her shoulders and hug her head* Cutie!!!! *___*

Lovely ocs, lovely cosplays and lovely everything!!! X3

Marmite666
2nd Oct 2014, 15:14
Tori is offering Turelim hugs...any takers? >

http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff411/lucinvampire/Cosplay/HUGZ.jpg





Lothasa falls 'Victim' to Tori's obsession with 'hugz'.
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No-one is safe.

GonarTrvig
2nd Oct 2014, 16:06
You both are so adorable I can't deal with it <3

lucinvampire
3rd Oct 2014, 12:12
Thankies all :D I really can't wait to run around as her again - London be warned...Tori is coming to town.

RealLoK
8th Oct 2014, 11:51
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Gladius, one of my two Dumahim. In his human life, Gladius was a mercenary, often hired by paranoid nobles or merchants. Even as a human, he found entertainment and pleasure in inflicting pain upon others. He soon became notorious for his fiery temper, a trait which he also displayed after his "rebirth".
His sire, however, displayed great displeasure at the sight of Gladius losing his temper. From that day on, Gladius vowed to control himself. But it was harder than it sounded. One day, while hunting, he met Minuett. She sat on a rock in the middle of a lake. The aura of serenity that surrounded her fascinated him, and so he asked her to teach him how to meditate. Minuett agreed, under the precondition that their meetings were to be kept secret.

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/281/e/b/mystyle_by_ganonstadt-d8216sq.jpg

Aileen, my second Dumahim, is quite the opposite of Gladius. She is calm and rational, and thus, her approach to combat is more tactical. She respects her sire, but hates his arrogance and constant boasting. Of course, she keeps these opinions to herself (openly voicing them would be suicide...). Aileen hates getting too much attention and sees herself as more of a spectator of events. Even in battles, she usually dodges her enemie's attacks for a while to analyse their fighting style before actually attacking.

GonarTrvig
16th Oct 2014, 20:34
Really cool characters ^^

Okay, now that I think I have enough energies (and I'm pretty bored xD) I think is time to me to post a couple of new OCs I thought about lately (-but K! Even more OCs? -Yes, even more!).

Ehem! So yeah, there we go ^^u. Hope you like them ;)

Aegle

Aegle was a slave in life, locked in one of the plenty of blood farms property of the Empire. As it was expected from humans who were born in captivity, she was docile, quiet and obedient. She would do the hardest works without arguing, even since being a little girl. But she had an special fight, which would try hard to hide from her masters and use it to help her fellow humans. Basically she had some inner magic, specially healing one, even if it was weak due to the lack of a master who would teach her to use it properly. But, being kind as she was, she would often lay on of hands on tired and hurt slaves to relieve their pain, and so they would already consider her some kind of guardian angel.

When Aegle was 16 years old, her power was discovered by a Melchahim while she was trying to heal yet another tired human slave. And, thinking that he saw in that teenager a possible way to discover how to overcome the weakness of the clan, such vampire killed her and brought her back as part of his brethren. Turned against her will, and still remembering her past, Aegle refused to leave her humanity behind. She tried to feed from corpses or to don't kill humans if it wasn't on self-defence. In fact, even never speaking against her masters, she tried to take advantage of being a numerous clan to have as much independence as possible. Though for the first years was hard, being part of an experiment and so being under control to see if her inner magic would make her stronger. Much for the disappointment of her brothers and sisters, Aegle would need to take skin from bodies to sew it on her own body as much as any other fledgling of the clan. Not only that, but she apparently lost her powers, not being able to heal anymore...

However, since one day, being surrounded and alone against human hunters, she discovered how her inner powers changed: Or she guessed when she regained control over herself and saw the corpses around her, all the scenery in blood. Basically her magic bonded with the blood control of the clan of Melchiah. Every time Aegle got really nervous or anxious, her feral side would take control over her mind, and so she would be able to manipulate blood to create hard weapons with them, being able for example to equip herself with "daggers" getting out directly from her wrists or even kill a human with their own blood by creating stakes which would destroy their body from inside. In change, Aegle is no able to use her blood manipulation when she's concious of her acts. As consequence, she would be feared and not trusted at the same time by both humans and vampires. After all, by losing control, she wouldn't be able to tell who was ally and who enemy...

Even then, she never renounced at all at the remains of her humanity, trying to never stand out. Something that is not hard when you're a Melchahim...

Now the next one. I may say that this idea started like a silly idea, but ender evolving until getting something cooler! Also added something to the story of my Dumahim Hector I didn't plan to do at first.

Abemi

While the War of Nosgoth keeps going... There was a small region, at the edge of the territory, where rumours started to spread first, then vampire's blood: A female human, of dark skin and savage look, who came from far away lands. She released some humans from a near blood farm, killing all the vampire guardians there. And started a resistance which would be a hard hit against the Empire if they managed to join the rest of the humans in Meridian. Something that was just question of time.

Meanwhile, Hector considered that was enough strong and had enough privilege in the clan Dumahim, so he dared to ask to his lord for more: In fact, for being able and taught to create new vampires, and so contribute to feed the clan with new, strong warriors. Even then, he kept his respect for his lord, so Dumah, after thinking about it, decided the next: If Hector was able to kill the Ebony Warrior with his own claws, he would be able to turn her into her first fledgling. Sharing the arrogance of his masters and brethren, the assassin accepted without hesitation.

Even being a trial, Dumah knew that he couldn't send just a vampire against that small army of humans, not in that time, so he allowed Hector to lead a small group of Reavers to take them down. After a couple of days of travelling day and night, only stopping to recover some energies, finally the Dumahim warriors arrived to their destiny, and found the group of rebels and the Ebony Warrior herself resting around a fire, apparently without paying a lot of attention to their surrounds. Seeing the advantage of an ambush, some of the vampires started to get closer to the group, hiding in the shadows while Hector was watching, waiting for his own opportunity. And that was how he noticed the traps... But not in time. Before he could warn his brothers, some of them fell down into holes with stakes, being immediately impaled. The humans reacted fast, some of them getting torches, and even few falling already into the traps to burn the corpses...

The fight from there was a really hard one, falling both vampires and humans in a brutal battle. Until only Hector and the Ebony Warrior were standing up, tired, with wounds and blood, some of it from their enemies... But still able to fight. The human with a ritual axe and fur clothes which allowed her a lot of movement of her strong muscles, and the vampire with daggers he would still keep from his times as human assassin following the Priestess. The kept the fight, Hector being able just to dodge most of the hits, the dark woman not giving to him almost rest, but also not allowing it to herself either. At one moment, while the Reaver jumped and flipped back, managed in the air to throw one of his daggers to the woman's neck. He hit her, but she released the ritual axe, which with the energy of she turning the moment she got hit, plus it's own weight, managed to hit Hector and almost cut his body in half. And so he fell on the floor at the edge of death and losing conciousness.

Once he woke up again, Hector was still badly hurt, his body badly keeping itself in one piece... But he saw the corpse of the Ebony Warrior next to him. The Reaver managed to drag his body closer without losing the lower part in the way, and fed himself with the blood of his victim. Not enough to heal completely the wounds, but at least to being able to move without risking being part in half in the process. Dragging the corpse with him, and after other few days of walking, Hector came back with his trophy. He wasn't greeted as a hero, however, since the rest of his brothers died in the fight... But, in exchange, he got a strong warrior to join the clan. So, after some discussion, finally Dumah decided to keep his word and teach the assassin how to give to her the dark gift.

And so this is how Abemi turned from a human warrior from foreign lands to a member of the clan of Dumah, and so "daughter" of Hector. She turned to be as strong, or even more, as in her previous life, even if for the first weeks she tried to kill her creator in revenge. Only once she got to know him better and understood her situation, the dark woman accepted her destiny. From there, she was discovered to be more of an extrovert person, and with some artistic skills, specially in make-up and hairdressing. She likes to create a lot of wigs to change her hair style often, when she doesn't play with her own... Also she loves to custom a lot her warrior marks, being her favourite a full skull on her head when she's shaved. A bit sarcastic, likes to tease a lot with small jokes and pranks, basically verbally, and even calling to Hector often "dad" to upset him. Even then, she learned at the end to respect him as the warrior to managed to defeat her after a hard fight, and now her master. Also she has no problem anymore to kill humans. She needs to feed herself, after all, and new and healthy hair for her wigs.

Marmite666
21st Nov 2014, 14:40
Welp, I commissioned an artist called Galaxy-Little on Tumblr so here for your viewing pleasure is Pre evolved, grumpy little Dorian and the more refined, older Dorian ^^
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RealLoK
2nd Dec 2014, 21:05
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/336/5/6/namenloservampir_by_ganonstadt-d88go8y.png

Yet another one of my "babies". His name is Seth, and he is a Zephonim. As a human, he was the leader of a group of teenagers who lived in the streets of Meridian. Next to nothing is known about his parents or what happened to them, he just showed up in the slums when he was fourteen years old. There were a lot of homeless teens in the city, some of which had ganged up to survive. Despite being the youngest member of his gang, Seth's wits helped him to become their leader. For five years, he lived like this. He and his friends spent their nights in dark alleys and earned a living by doing occasional (sometimes not quite legal) jobs and stealing. Seth was quite satisfied with this existence, never really thinking about trying to escape it. But when he was nineteen years old, his gang got into a fight with another group of young boys. One of his opponents had a hidden knife, which Seth didn't notice until it pierced his chest. Seeing their leader being killed, the rest of Seth's gang ran away. Luckily, a spy of the Zephonim had been following Seth for quite a while, as he seemed to be clever enough to be considered Zephonim-material. Witnessing the boy's death, the spy brought the body to Zephon, who then revived Seth.
Seth was never a very serious person, but not really cheerful either. He is quite selfish, seeing the suffering of others with a feeling of smug satisfaction. He is also quite cunning and knows how to twist other people's plans to his advantage.

Varulven
20th Dec 2014, 03:03
This is Gabriel, a member of clan Dumahim.
Before he was turned into a vampire he was a slave.
Nobody knows why Lord Dumah had choosen him, because Gabriel just isn't a warrior, he's just more like a dreamer.

Now I don't have more to tell, my characters get their story during RP.

(edit: plz can anyone make the pic smaller? I already used the thumb tag and it is still sooo big O_o)

GonarTrvig
20th Dec 2014, 03:23
Oooh, nice to see more references of Dorian, and also more Zephonims! *_* And yaaay! Gabriel!!! *___* *hugs him*

I would post yet something more, but actually I don't have in mind more characters, at least no more I can take out of RPs or just I'm not interested for now in develop further ^^u. However, I commissioned a chibi from StudioChouChou (the same guy who made my draw of my Reaver Hector ^^). This time a chibi version of my Melchahim Aegle, who about I posted in my previous post ;)



The hair colour is wrong, but he never got to fix it and I'm too lazy for doing it myself xD. Aaanyway, isn't she a cutie pie? ^^

P.D.: Is there something wrong with the thumb option? My pic shows a bit too big as well, at least is just a preview issue in my case owO.

lucinvampire
20th Dec 2014, 13:11
Very awesome pics everyone - I want to hug them all...even if they might kill me :D

If a picture is smaller than the tumbtag size then sometimes using the thumbtags will actually increases the picture size - it might be best trying with the normal picture tag and previewing to see how big it is in that view - and then if possible either post it or change back to using thumbtags.

Varulven
20th Dec 2014, 23:53
Very awesome pics everyone - I want to hug them all...even if they might kill me :D

If a picture is smaller than the tumbtag size then sometimes using the thumbtags will actually increases the picture size - it might be best trying with the normal picture tag and previewing to see how big it is in that view - and then if possible either post it or change back to using thumbtags.

Does html work on this forum?
In case it does I would resize it via html...

GonarTrvig
21st Dec 2014, 00:15
Very awesome pics everyone - I want to hug them all...even if they might kill me :D

If a picture is smaller than the tumbtag size then sometimes using the thumbtags will actually increases the picture size - it might be best trying with the normal picture tag and previewing to see how big it is in that view - and then if possible either post it or change back to using thumbtags.

Oh, by all means, you're very welcome to hug Aegle ^^. In fact, I imagine Terry picking her up easily and letting her sit on his shoulder or something like that X3 (because she's really petite!).

About the image... In my case, without the tumbtag looks even bigger, so I'll leave it with it. But thanks anyway :3.