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SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 12:27
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a_dbYZixfn8

The first part of the EPIC SAGA known as "Love Is Deffinatly Blind". Unfortunately, this is the slowest and least offensive of the chapters.

GrievousOdyssey
25th Jun 2010, 12:47
It wasn't slow ... but it did sounded like you're trying not to succumb to the summer madness ...

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 13:05
I had to turn my speakers up to full blast to hear it, then someone messages me on steam, i think i may be death.

I demand... MOAR!

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 13:13
It wasn't slow ... but it did sounded like you're trying not to succumb to the summer madness ...

All failed clones have trouble in the hotter days of summer. Gets too hot in this goddamn gas mask...I got it under control.

Bevacur
25th Jun 2010, 13:26
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a_dbYZixfn8

The first part of the EPIC SAGA known as "Love Is Deffinatly Blind". Unfortunately, this is the slowest and least offensive of the chapters.

I also turned the volume up really high, i forgot about the volume and continued to watch your drawing of Sonichu, skipped a few minutes and my speakers burst out with some dramatic music. I only just about survived....

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 13:31
Lol I got a message from the author of the story:

I'm sorry you didn't like my story. But as I didn't write it for you, your
comments don't phase me at all.

...Damn it, no flame war?

Also, I'm confused. Who did she write it for? Why do my comments become any less valid because I'm not that person?

Did she write it for people that like bad fanfiction?

Lol I have to reply to this, stat.

EDIT: Replied, and you're about to see a dangerous, previously unknown creature called "somewhat calm and rational Slash"

Mmmm-hmmmm.

Well, that's interesting. Who was it written for? Because I'd think that if you posted it online, where everybody can easily get to it, it ceases to be a private thing. If it was for some friend of yours, presumably whoever Reilly is based off of, you could have easily just sent it to them without publishing it. By putting it on fanfiction.net, you release it to everyone and have to deal with any criticism that comes your way. Hell, if you had a problem with one of my stories, I wouldn't dismiss you as "not being the person who I wrote it for", I'd acknowledge and try to address your problems. Because that's what writers are supposed to do. Even fanfiction writers.

Here are a few problems I have. I'm not going to use invective in these questions, I'll try to be as polite as possible. In return, I would appreciate good answers. Since you didn't answer my message in the Tara Gillesbie "ok *** you" manner, I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt here and assume you have answers.

1.) What exactly does Freddy see in Damien? Sure, she had died for a bit, but how would he know she wasn't just making it up? And why would this affect him significantly enough to make him refrain from killing her, when the alternative- killing her, then killing Reilly- would free him from the house so that he could go kill people again, certainly the better option from his (completely insane serial killer) point of view?

2.) Why is Jason perfectly literate when he was severely retarded and deformed in the movies? That was, I believe, the reason he was pushed into the lake by the kid; because they considered him a freak. And why does Reilly have an attraction to what is essentially a waterlogged, half-rotted corpse? Even if, when in hell, he appears in a more human form, he still couldn't read or write.

3.) Why can Michael Myers talk and father a child? He was never able to talk, and considering how he was a voiceless representation of evil (referred to as the boogeyman in the first, even) meant to play off of the babysitter's fear of someone breaking into the house when they are looking after the kids, I doubt he could ever get settled down long enough to have a kid.

Respond soon.

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 13:53
SlashPrower, using the K&L2 Board as a place to rant about bad fanfic writers since 2010.

-edit- Yknow what im gonna do, im gonna go out and write a really REALLY ****ty fanfic and send it to you JUST to get you pissed off, well. pissed off more than you our at the moment.

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 13:55
Damn straight.

Actually, it's more like:

SlashPrower, using the K&L2 boards to up the views on her YouTube videos since 2010.

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 14:00
I miss being young, you remind me of a younger me, sept you know - the tits and vajayjay.

-edit- yay tits isnt filtered

tits tits tits tits tits

GrievousOdyssey
25th Jun 2010, 14:01
Great , good job Grievous , you've been used by a woman for her personal gains , Again ...

Bevacur
25th Jun 2010, 14:03
Johnson im guessing you over 20?

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 14:04
Great , good job Grievous , you've been used by a woman for her personal gains , Again ...

Get used to it, as long as I'm here you're going to be manipulated and used like a puppet on strings. And then thrown away.

Also, MxO is quickly becoming my creepy stalker. Maybe I can manipulate Grievous into killing him with the promise of delicious food.

EDIT: god you guys if you watch the video then leave a freaking comment or something

Bevacur
25th Jun 2010, 14:05
Anyone aged 16 like poor ickle me?

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 14:05
I am.

Bevacur
25th Jun 2010, 14:06
Your the youngest i guess, i'm 17 in July WOOOOOOO, DRIVING TESTS!!!

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 14:06
S.T.A.L.K.E.R Shadow Of Johnson

Bevacur
25th Jun 2010, 14:08
And the main character is Johnson and your goal is to hunt down a guy called Johnson, so your stalking yourself.

GrievousOdyssey
25th Jun 2010, 14:13
Aaah welcome , welcome mister Johnson ...
May i check your briefcase ? ...

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 14:14
-Throws briefcase onto table like in hitman, briefcase then exploads and initiates an epic fight between grievous, Bevacur and 2 peanuts-

GrievousOdyssey
25th Jun 2010, 14:16
We're getting off topic again ...
THIS IS NUTS ! ...

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 14:18
No... THIS IS SPARTA!

Bevacur
25th Jun 2010, 14:18
Yeah sorry Slash for derailing your thread but i will get it back on trac...Ooh a light bulb!

UhUh
25th Jun 2010, 16:02
EDIT: god you guys if you watch the video then leave a freaking comment or something

Yeah sorry,

The terrific writing, mixed with your entusiast reading plus my complete ignorance of the subject turned me off, no offence :hmm:

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 16:02
Lol Grievous I didn't even have to look at your name to know that the comment belonged to you. I just saw all the ellipses and immediately knew.

EDIT: Well, I'll be certain to turn on all the HAM factors for the next update, which will be amazing.

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 16:56
Lol, I checked the archives and you guys are lucky that I found this before I found her Twilight fanfic, else I'd be doing that instead. Though maybe not, because from the few paragraphs I read it seems really boring and stupid. Just like Twilight. >___>

Is it a requirement for all really bad girl fanfic writers to write a Twilight fanfic?

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 17:02
Goooooood saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaake

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 17:07
Im sorry slash, im not tryna be mean here, but i wanna ask.

WHY DO ALL ******* PEOPLE WHO LIKE ANIME AND JAPANESE CRAP ALWAYS CALL PEOPLE KUE-CHAN ****-CHAN ETC.

Jesus christ i get so many of these people who adore anime and stuff come onto Zombie Panic Source and say Kawaii, Desu, and call me Fonzie-chan. IT IS SO Awkward...

Personally, i hate anime with a passion, on so many levels, i dont hate the art style, but the way its used.
GRGMANgangnasgasgnasgasgasgagajngjsangasngjangapow

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 17:12
BECAUSE THEY'RE ******* ANNOYING WEEABOOS MxO

People who use desu and **** are fat Americans who wish they were Japanese and will shove their knowledge of about 4 Japanese words in your face because IT'S SO COOL KAWAII DESU DESU WATASHI WA ETC. ^____^. They will also go on about how they only watch SUBTITLED ANIMES IN TEH ORIGINAL LANGUAGE because they are annoying pricks.

And now you know.

Also, please inform them that "-chan" is rather feminine, usually used to refer to younger girls or a girlfriend. If they weren't retards, it would be"-san".

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 17:14
Yea i know about weaboos n **** but your an anime-*** so i thought you think like em

Like, What drives them to keep going on.

Asjgangaffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Your agood example., you dont use japanese words or act like one, but your turning YOUR TURNING! lol

Brackstone17
25th Jun 2010, 17:17
God, it's worse than I ever imagined. The "sorry Freddy, I love you" is just, well, ugh.

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 17:28
I recorded the audio for the new chapter, it's a bit louder and I channeled all my rage so that I sound enthusiastic. I do a voice on the verge of tears well.

However, there may still be problems with the audio being somewhat quiet and there are one or two hiccups where I messed up my words, but they're not really noticable.

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 17:30
Use sony vegas, it can boost sound.

Or buy a better mic.

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 17:32
Awww hell, i just realised.

Slashs name refers to gay sonic characters.

I am scared.

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 17:40
Lol, you read that comment

It's actually a fan character I created when I was a 10 year-old, I used it on one account and have used it for my accounts ever since because:

1.)Too lazy to remember multiple user names

2.)Reminder of how much I can suck, so my ego doesn't get too big

I was too young to know that "slash" referred to gay fanfic porn.

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 17:41
lol, for some reason vlogs make me laugh, ever since i realised some guy in our school did it, it made me laugh and i never look at him the same/

I should do a vlog, can you imagine haha

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 19:14
I'm even putting in a title card with music

We're pulling out all the stops now >__>

EDIT: Uploading the second part, but I have to add annotations.

And that title card reminds me how much I like the Nightmare On Elm Street theme...plus, it prepares you for the horrors within.

GrievousOdyssey
25th Jun 2010, 20:27
I'm having a headache at reading the last twelve comments on this topic , **** is ridiculous , i'm outta here ...

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 20:32
Yea i know about weaboos n **** but your an anime-*** so i thought you think like em

Like, What drives them to keep going on.

Asjgangaffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Your agood example., you dont use japanese words or act like one, but your turning YOUR TURNING! lol

They think they're cool, I suppose. I'm not really sure myself. They have their own little group and try in vain to infiltrate other places. Just beat them with a shovel if you encounter them.

I draw anime because I like the stylized look of it , and occasionally I'll watch a few episodes of stuff like Elfen Lied, Death Note, or Fullmetal Alchemist and be able to enjoy them. However, I am not a weeaboo, and I look down upon those pocky-scarfing, sweaty bastards. Just like how I enjoy writing fanfiction but look down upon people like the author of this story and refuse to be grouped with them. I'm a bit of an anomaly.

Lol Grievous *pats Grievous on head sympathetically*

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 21:33
Bamf. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b8vx2-OUAVc

Way better than the first one.

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 21:51
Little annotations makes mxo a happy bunny

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 21:54
If there's one thing I learned from manwithoutabody, it's that annotations make dramatic readings easier to watch.

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 21:55
You should teach me to write stories, i may have passed my GCSE's in english when i did them but i still dont know when where or how to start writing a story. i started one years ago, heck i still got the concept flowing in my head, but i cant get the thing started hhaha

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 21:59
Well I don't really know, the only story that got going was Last Stand, and I only wrote that because the power was out and I was bored.

And then there's the Rain Of Mercy script, which I force myself to do because no way I'm disappointing chaoticd.

In conclusion, wait until a power outage and write the **** out of it.

Also, I have absolutely no technique that I can name. I just sort of write, and sometimes it's good and sometimes it sucks. Um...for beginnings, which are the hardest, work the beginning all out in your head and type it down later while listening to music. If you hit writer's block, do the same thing- work it out in your head, figure out what you want to do, and keep going.

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 22:00
I'll add you on msn one time, share ideas, if thats alright with choo?

CHOO CHOO

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 22:03
yo dawg don't have msn and ****

besides i wouldn't give it to you anyway dawg

because you're a creepy ginger robot stalker

dawg

just like e-mail me or somethin'

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 22:07
Oh hell this gawna get bad

Shut up you silly ******* woman, get back in the ******* kitchen where you belong.

Shut up you dirty weaboo go eat your rice with your sticks

Shut up you anime obcessed weirdo.

GR GRRRR.

i kid i kid, yea you should get msn, or at least facebook chat or something, i dont use msn rarely anymore due to STEAM being the bizzle right now, but msn is always handy for chats.

MxOAgentJohnson
25th Jun 2010, 22:14
haha i wanna read a fanfic, apparently my voice is really epic -according to this zombie panic source server- i was playing on today, i shall do one tomorow!

GrievousOdyssey
25th Jun 2010, 22:58
*walks in , sees twelve new bloody posts* ...

So there's my mistress over there who says she doesn't use msn , copying me , argh ! ...
Then there's that happy bunny that Absolutely always has to say he's joking at the end of his jokes ...

After all this time he thinks we wouldn't understand when he's joking about the woman in the kitchen thing ... jesus ...

SlashPrower
25th Jun 2010, 23:31
I like it when Grievous comes into the thread because that means I have a modicum of protection from the stalker.

Plus, him and Brackstone are my favorites >.>

GrievousOdyssey
26th Jun 2010, 00:22
Aaawe sheeeaaat , now i have to follow standard character development and grow jalous of Brackstone and kill him over a girl ...

Meanwhile that Stalker over there will take profit from this situation and start showing to everybody why he is called Johnson ...

And in the end a nuclear bomb explodes out of nowhere ...

But nobody dies , which makes this the best movie of all time ...

Brackstone17
26th Jun 2010, 00:42
Aaawe sheeeaaat , now i have to follow standard character development and grow jalous of Brackstone and kill him over a girl ...

No, I'm too young to die!

SlashPrower
26th Jun 2010, 00:47
Not to take sides but anyone who attacks Brackstone is going to be taking a long walk off of a short pier.

Just so it's fair, though, anyone who attacks Grievous gets to take a swim in the vats of sulfuric acid I keep in my garage.

GrievousOdyssey
26th Jun 2010, 01:10
So if i kill Brackstone , i get forced to fall into a void by you , while you yourself takes a swim in your own sulfur pool ...

So in the end we all die ... IT'S POETIC ...

But then if you think about it , Brackstone is the first to die for no good reason ...

Marvelous ...

MxOAgentJohnson
26th Jun 2010, 08:55
i say im joking after all insults because i've gotten into a lot of **** from people who dont realise when im joking and when im not

So i tend to recently just write i joke after things as not to start World War 3

GrievousOdyssey
26th Jun 2010, 11:51
Them people are idiots , **** 'em ...
I mean it takes common sense to figure that when a user does these 'offensive' posts without having any retaliations from the moderators or other users , it means that they are jokes ... But indeed , i've noticed that quite alot can't realize that , so **** 'em ...

Not literally though ... i know what you are capable of ...

Besides , it's not like if we're going to get some new 'dedicated' forum members now , so there won't be any need to 'explain' **** any longer ...

SlashPrower
26th Jun 2010, 14:39
On a completely unrelated note, it is totally easy to rack up views for my Kane and Lynch videos.

I just have to find people who are complaining about how it's going to suck and then I reply to them with something like, "Dude. You do not know the half of it. Check out my channel, I read the leaked script and talked about it. You would not believe half the crap they did."

Then they watch it and leave a comment about how much it's going to blow. And if I'm lucky, I get a subscription or two.

GrievousOdyssey
26th Jun 2010, 14:55
Well if you care about subscription too why didn't you say so ? ...

I'm susbscribed to over fifty people that i never watch their vids , i only liked one of their vids and subscribed their whole channel , don't know why ...
Only three or four did i really subscribed for all the content they give ...

Edit : DAMN SLASH ! You're my hundreth subscription ! ...
*gives spectacular fireworks* ...

ohitspatty
26th Jun 2010, 14:57
Then they watch it and leave a comment about how much it's going to blow. And if I'm lucky, I get a subscription or two.

And then *bleep* Trophy unlocked; "Youtube Celebrity" followed by "Youtube Elite"

GrievousOdyssey
26th Jun 2010, 15:00
And then *bleep* Trophy unlocked; "Youtube Celebrity" followed by "Youtube Elite"

For some reason this reminded how much Youtube was a ******* for restarting my view counts ...

I had watched over ten thousand videos on youtube (or something like that) , then all of a sudden i'm back at zero , **** ! i almost had that trophy for watching a fourty seven thousand videos ...

Brackstone17
26th Jun 2010, 16:42
Well if you care about subscription too why didn't you say so ? ...

I'm susbscribed to over fifty people that i never watch their vids , i only liked one of their vids and subscribed their whole channel , don't know why ...
Only three or four did i really subscribed for all the content they give ...

Edit : DAMN SLASH ! You're my hundreth subscription ! ...
*gives spectacular fireworks* ...
That's like me with adding favourites. Any video I like I usually favourite, now I have like a thousand favourites. It's bad, I don't even use the list to find my favourite videos anymore.

GrievousOdyssey
26th Jun 2010, 22:24
We've both been mind controlled by youtube ...

Bevacur
27th Jun 2010, 12:14
Mess with Bevacur and you will get a letter full of mean words.