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WADE13x
3rd Mar 2010, 21:56
okay i need to write a Shakespeare sonnet for English class and i stink at writing and wondering if you guys can help it has to be about freerunning/ parkour or skydiving any help is great

LIGHTS
3rd Mar 2010, 22:01
ooh I love poetry but Shakespeare.. not so much. what's the topic about first though? I'd be happy to help. :)

WADE13x
3rd Mar 2010, 22:07
ooh I love poetry but Shakespeare.. not so much. what's the topic about first though? I'd be happy to help. :)

freerunning / parkour / school / track / skydiving or driving a 4 wheeler

LIGHTS
3rd Mar 2010, 22:09
how many lines? 14?

WADE13x
3rd Mar 2010, 22:11
how many lines? 14?

yes in this format with 10 syllables in each line
a
b
a
b
c
d
c
d
e
f
e
f
g
g

LIGHTS
3rd Mar 2010, 22:25
I can't go to school because I am sick
I can't go to school because I am afraid
if I step outside my house, I'll get hit with a brick
that on my way I might get run over by a parade
I can't go to school because I have a funeral to attend
I can't go to school because I woke up extremely late
and the school uniforms are just not the trend
and I torn a muscle while learning to skate
I can't go to school because I feel a bit blue
I can't go to school because school is so boring
and my sister stuck my hands together with glue
what other excuses will I have the next morning
or maybe I should go no matter how much I detest
the time we spend in school will always be the best




terribly sorry if it sucks. http://s236.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/nfforums/NF%20smilies/frowna.gif

HHDnBKing!
3rd Mar 2010, 22:26
*Shudders* At hearing the name Shakespeare, hopes that the **** died the most horrible, painful and slow suffering death!

On-topic resume:

WADE13x
3rd Mar 2010, 22:27
I can't go to school because I am sick
I can't go to school because I am afraid
if I step outside my house, I'll get hit with a brick
that on my way I might get run over by a parade
I can't go to school because I have a funeral to attend
I can't go to school because I woke up extremely late
and the school uniforms are just not the trend
and I torn a muscle while learning to skate
I can't go to school because I feel a bit blue
I can't go to school because school is so boring
and my sister stuck my hands together with glue
what other excuses will I have the next morning
or maybe I should go no matter how much I detest
the time we spend in school will always be the best




terribly sorry if it sucks. http://s236.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/nfforums/NF%20smilies/frowna.gif

thats great thanks is it okay if i use that for school?
:D:D:D thanks

WADE13x
3rd Mar 2010, 22:28
*Shudders* At hearing the name Shakespeare, hopes that the **** died the most horrible, painful and slow suffering death!

On-topic resume:

lol same i hate it

LIGHTS
3rd Mar 2010, 22:32
@wade
yeah by all means. :) I didn't just post it for fun, lol. well, maybe I did.. http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c172/nfandom/sweat.gif

WADE13x
3rd Mar 2010, 22:35
lol this is what i frist came up with


Now that our passion is forgotten
Completely all of that was whole
of a crossed heart is not but
a hole where our love layed
and now that all seems to be gone
I feel a flicker of light
is still their but only until dawn
lets not fight anymore for it is night
as I sit and think to myself
all I can think about is you
and it burns for me to look at my self
of the picture of you and thats changes my veiw
what shall become of this lust I have for thee
for it shall become nothing but dust

LIGHTS
3rd Mar 2010, 22:38
I think it's really good. you should use this one, but it's your choice. your's is just.. WAO. http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a311/SanativeStigma/clap.gif

WADE13x
3rd Mar 2010, 22:39
I think it's really good. you should use this one, but it's your choice. your's is just.. WAO. http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a311/SanativeStigma/clap.gif

my teacher hated it as the draft